I'm glad it didn't get an endless stretch like most romcoms do and yet 14 chapters were not enough :/ .
Considering that the story got an axe, it still had an okay ending! Let's see why. The main point of the story is Momiji being saved, while Miyato accepted his feelings and dated Momiji and of course the star of the story is Multiverse Miyato not only saved Momiji but also enjoyed the time he spent with her!
I would be interested in what the final decision would have been if he didn't get an axe? Both of them stay or maybe fate strikes back and Multiverse Miyato sacrifices himself but he still had the opportunity to be Momiji and say the things he couldn't do in his own world. But these are just theories... but... but. yet if the idea had been something like that then it could have been a cute and dramatic yet perfect ending for the three of them or it could have been a good ending if in the end if they played the Miyato twins and the three of them would stay together and no one would lose.
I usually don't give good points or opinions, I don't theorize about axe things at all and of course there are mistakes in the plots but compared to that it still gave the basics so that we don't feel like it was such a lame ending. I hope Ichik sensei gets a second chance!!
7/10 Story is okay, drawing is good and their characters are fine too.