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Tuesday, October 14, 2025

Best SF: 1968: B Shaw, D I Masson, & J D MacDonald

I guess I've had my copy of Best SF:1968, edited by Harry Harrison of Stainless Steel Rat fame with some help from Brian Aldiss, for years now; today I finally get around to reading some of it.  Mine is the US paperback edition of an anthology first printed over on the sceptered isle as The Year's Best Science Fiction, No. 2 and reprinted several times over the years under various titles and with slightly differing contents--my edition includes a story by Aldiss but in some other editions a story by Theodore Sturgeon takes its place.  

Obviously I love the Paul Lehr cover on the American editions-- the color, the little human figures, the crags, the domed ship or building sheltering structures that echo the crags, the little dart-like craft, the mist obscured planet, and the monstrous eyes.  Awesome.  Then we have Harry Harrison's intro, in which he trumpets the success of SF in getting mainstream and academic attention and minimizes the drama surrounding the New Wave, arguing that there "there is no new wave, save in the eye of the beholder"; after all, there have always been experimental SF authors and there have always been writers whose prose is "dense, impressionistic, and bad."  Frustratingly, Harrison doesn't back up his assertions with a lists of SF writers active before and after the heralding of the New Wave who meet the criteria of "experimental," "dense," "impressionistic" and "bad," and goes on to say stuff like "One of the foremost writers in the 'new wave' admitted that my own writing fits into both [new wave and old wave] camps" without telling us who this "foremost" writer is.  I find these kinds of blind items annoying.      

Then come the stories.  Today we'll deal with the contributions by Bob Shaw, whom we have read several things by and whom I like, David I. Masson, with whom I am not at all familiar, and detective writer John D. MacDonald, whose work I think we have encountered five or six times.

 "Appointment on Prila" by Bob Shaw (1968)

When we read Shaw's "A Full Member of the Club" in 2020 and his "The Weapons of Isher II" in 2018, I compared them to the work of beloved Canadian madman A. E. van Vogt, and in his intro to it here in Best SF: 1958, Harrison compares "Appointment on Prila" to the output of good ol' Van.  The comparison is appropriate--as in many of the stories that ended up serving as raw material for Voyage of the Space Beagle and The War Against the Rull, in "Appointment on Prila" humans are confronted by an alien monster with special powers and have to figure out how to survive the encounter.

First we meet the alien monster, witnessing its tremendous abilities and getting a sense it is a callous exploiter of our kind.  Then we meet the humans, who are exploring the inhospitable world on which the monster has been marooned by a third group of enigmatic aliens who sought to exile the dangerous creature.  The human ship has a complement of six ground vehicles; these have sallied forth to map the planet.  But when the mapping is done, it is seven vehicles that approach the mother ship--one is the shape-shifting monster!  Can the Terrans puzzle out which machine is an enemy in disguise before it devours them?

A fun classic-style science fiction tale full of astronomy, high technology and cool aliens that is all about how awesome science, logic and explorers are, has a twist ending, and is well-written and well-structured.  Thumbs up for "Appointment on Prila."   

Having debuted in Analog, "Appointment on Prila" reappeared in two 1969 anthologies by Harrison, this Best of book and Worlds of Wonder.  When our friends in the Netherlands got around to translating Best SF:1968 in 1979 they titled the anthology after this Shaw story.  "Appointment on Prila" seems to be the first in a series of stories about the starship crew it depicts; maybe I should check them all out.  On the other hand, it kind of looks like the stories all served as the source material for a 1979 fix-up novel, Ship of Strangers, so maybe I should read that.

"Lost Ground" by David I. Masson 

In his intro to "Lost Ground," Harrison really talks up Masson, saying, among other things, that "overenthusiasm in the past has discovered too many bright lights of authors--who become darkened cinders after emitting only a handful of protons.  This will not be true of Masson."  isfdb lists ten short stories by Masson, only four of them appearing after "Lost Ground," so maybe Harrison got over his skis a little here.    

It is the surreal future.  The air is full of particles that manipulate human emotion; these particles are pushed around by natural weather patterns, to the point that the feelings and behavior of people can be predicted like the weather, with radio newscasters saying stuff like 

"A system of depressions and associated troughs will follow one another in quick succession over Scotland and the north....Insecure, rather sad feeling today and tomorrow, followed by short-lived griefs, some heavy, some stormy, with cheerful intervals.  By midweek griefs will be dying out...."

"Lost Ground" is full of sentences like "...a squall of rage and grief burst upon him" and "The chilliness was becoming palpable hostility...."  Somewhat muddying the picture of emotion-determining particles behaving like the weather, later in the story we learn that certain areas generate certain emotions in people and that each time of year also has a characteristic effect on people's psychological state.  Maybe this is a satire of how little the "experts" really know about both the weather and human psychology?

People in the third world are at the mercy of this "mood-weather," and it retards their development, while in the developed world (this story is set in England, which when the story was written was still considered developed, ha ha ha please don't take offense at my little joke) people mitigate the effects of the mood-weather by using air purifiers and air conditioners inside and by taking drugs--everybody keeps close at hand a battery of pills and aerosol sprays to stabilize and improve their moods and employ them at the drop of a hat.  Try wrapping your head around a society in which everybody is constantly on drugs, dear reader! 

This crazy world is dramatized for us through the experiences of a middle-class family whose head of household is a TV journalist.  An "unexpected pocket of terror in a dip in the road" causes a driver to crash, killing the journalist's son, and his wife loses her will to live and stops taking all the drugs everybody is on.  The journalist and his wife move to a rural area to get away from it all, leaving their surviving child, a little girl, with relatives.  There is a weird phenomena taking place near the little village where they are staying--the fields of an abandoned farm inexplicably seem to change, with hedges and walls and rocks appearing one day and disappearing the next; animals that venture onto the farm sometimes vanish.  The bereaved mother walks into the fields and disappears, and her husband becomes a member of the team investigating the phenomenon.  It turns out that, with bewildering inconsistency, some sections of the fields are moving forward in time and others backward, and people and animals that move from one section to another can cross the barrier of time and find themselves unable to return.

The journalist searches through time for his wife.  He winds up sixty years in the future, and is collected by scientists who are studying this region of time-chaos, which has been growing over the decades to encompass more and more of England, necessitating migrations of people out of its path.  The journalist is interrogated by future journalists.  He has a conversation with his daughter, who has grown up and become old without her parents.  Then he joins a team trying to map the region of time-distortion; the plot is resolved when the journalist finds himself in some Early Modern era in which the men wear lace and breeches and are religious, and learns that his wife got stuck in that period, became a respected and even beloved member of the community, and died of old age--this was foreshadowed earlier in the story, back in the 20th century, when he saw her old weathered headstone but didn't know it was hers because the inscription was partly worn away.    

"Lost Ground" feels long and slow.  Masson spends a lot of time explaining the story's two uncanny phenomena and providing examples of them in operation, so that the story feels repetitive and the phenomena become boring.  The characters are not compelling and you don't care what happens to them.  The two gimmicks and the plot are not bad in and of themselves, but the delivery is kind of flat and uninspiring.  Also, I'm not sure why the story has two gimmicks--the mood-weather gag doesn't affect the plot, which revolves around the time-travel gag, and both gimmicks make the same point, that the universe is inexplicable and we are at the mercy of outside forces and all that.  

We'll call it acceptable.

"Lost Ground" debuted in 1966 in an issue of New Worlds with a cover like something out of the credits sequence of a James Bond movie.  It was included in Masson's 1968 collection Caltrops of Time, which I guess is how Harrison justifies including it in a best of '68 book.  "Lost Ground" would go on to appear in European anthologies with some pretty cool spacey covers.


"The Annex" by John D. MacDonald (1968)

"The Annex" debuted in an issue of Playboy alongside stories by J. G. Ballard and Isaac Bashevis Singer, a bunch of film stills of a nude Julie Newmar, and an elaborate chart constructed by Len Deighton that tells you what to do, eat and buy in 21 European cities.  In his intro to the story, Harrison talks about how MacDonald is one of the best living American authors but the critics don't recognize it.  It kind of reads like Harrison being some sort of suck up, hoping the famous crime writer will rejoin the ranks of the SF community after a long absence or just say something nice about SF.  Sad.

"The Annex," like Masson's "Lost Ground," has surreal elements, and Harrison in his intro tells you the story is "Kafkaesque."  For example, a guy walks through a labyrinthine building, following a red pipe that vibrates in time with a big thumping machine somewhere in the building--I guess the machine is like a heart and the pipes are like veins or arteries, so that the building is like a body.   The protagonist has to navigate his way through the building to some upper floor room, I guess representing the brain, at the behest of inexplicable authorities. 

The guy meets a woman who acts in an inexplicable manner and complains about arbitrary authorities.  Then she guides him through the maze-like building.  MacDonald wastes our time describing the corridors and stairways, and reminds us this story was first printed in Playboy by describing the woman's ass and the guy's fantasies of feeling her up.  MacDonald fails to imbue these scenes with any kind of emotion or excitement--in real life being guided though a baffling series of corridors and stairways might be scary and studying the movements of a woman's ass might be sexually arousing, but MacDonald, I guess intentionally, to keep the story dreamlike and surreal, makes sure to not ascribe such emotions to his protagonist or to inspire such emotions in the reader.  I find this kind of surrealism that doesn't generate any emotion beyond "wow, this is surreal" to be a waste of time.

The pair gets to the door of the room the guy was assigned to perform some task within, but when the door is opened the room is not there, just a sheer drop, 40 or whatever floors down to the street.  The body the building represents is dying, even actually brain dead, we readers must assume.  The pair then retires to another room, still intact, and undress but do not, I guess, actually have sex.  

Finally comes the scene in which it is made clear this mission in a maze-like skyscraper was all the dream of a dying man and/or a metaphor for a doctor's failed attempt to heal a dying patient or something like that.  The doctor tells the loved one of the dying man that she can hold his hand as he dies and he will know she is there, even though the doctor knows the patient is already technically dead or dead by any practical measure.

A laborious and pretentious waste of time.  Maybe MacDonald really is a once-in-a-generation genius at writing about a guy in a boat unravelling a pyramid scheme or whatever the hell he usually writes about, but this pseudo-literary goop is not providing any evidence of that fact.  Thumbs down!

In 1976, "Annex" reared its ugly head in another anthology, The Late Great Future, and in 1978 appeared in the MacDonald SF collection Other Times, Other Worlds.

Nobody, no way, no how, is ever going to convince me that Beat or
Three of a Perfect Pair is half as good as Islands 

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The Masson and MacDonald stories are ambitious and you might call them "New Wave" what with their surrealism and pessimism but they are long and belabor their points and lack human feeling even though they are both about people's loved ones dying.  Shaw's story is a conventional old-fashioned science fiction story that is actually entertaining and easily the best of today's crop.  Score one for the old wave.

We'll probably read more stories from Best SF: 1968 in the near future.  Feel free to tune in for more of my bitter musings about the state of the world.

Sunday, March 3, 2024

Merril-approved 1956-7 stories by L Shaw, R Silverberg, H Still and T Sturgeon

Let's read some stories printed in 1956 (give or take a few months) by authors whose names begin with the letter S and which famous anthologist and mover and shaker in the SF community Judith Merril saw fit to recommend.  There are many such stories, and we've already read a few of them, like Clifford Simak's "Honorable Opponent" and Theodore Sturgeon's "And Now the News," and today four more of them will be thrust under the hot lights and face the third degree here at MPorcius Fiction Log.

"Syllabus" by Len Shaw (1956)

Shaw has eight short story credits at isfdb.  "Syllabus" appeared in the same issue of Science Fantasy as the debut of Brian Aldiss's Non-Stop, a book version of which we read way back in 2014 (when we were young and the world was free), and while Non-Stop has been reprinted a billion times and even won some kind of retro award in 2007, it looks like "Syllabus" has languished in obscurity ("success walks hand in hand with failure....")

Well, its obscurity is easily explicable, as is Merril's quixotic decision to champion it.  "Syllabus" has a simple plot: in the future of air cars, a husband and wife have a teen daughter who has been having trouble settling on a college major and career path.  After a few false starts she finally chooses marine zoology.  Her father's sleep is wracked by nightmares in which his daughter is eaten by a whale, so he takes the family flying machine to the women's college to talk to the imposing woman who is the headmistress, where he learns he is mixed up in the headmistress's scheme to manipulate his strong-willed daughter into revealing her budding psychic powers and signing up for study not in Zoology Dept but the school's Psionics Institute. 

The remarkable thing about "Syllabus" is its style.  Shaw renders the story in the vernacular of the future, and reading "Syllabus" is like reading a long difficult poem.  The text often ignores standard grammatical conventions--most of the sentences are technically fragments, and the reader has to supply a subject or a verb that is merely implied by context clues.  Almost every line includes some unusual word and some tweaked version of a stock phrase or cliched allusion--"Cardiac-Queen" for "queen of my heart" is one example.  Shaw's project in writing this story is not to narrate an obvious plot, but to illustrate the fact (explicitly mentioned in the editor's intro to the story) that English has evolved greatly over the last four or five centuries and will continue to evolve.

What is going on in "Syllabus" is comprehensible, but it is no smooth and easy ride, and it is not fun.  It is easy to admire the ambition, creativity and labor that went into "Syllabus," but it is hard to actually enjoy the product into which all those laudable resource has been put.  (Shaw's story is rather more challenging, and much less rewarding, that Anthony Burgess' A Clockwork Orange; the experience of reading "Syllabus" reminded me much more of that time I reading Aldiss' Report on Probability A.)  

Got to give "Syllabus" a thumbs down.  Looking for silver linings here, I will suggest that reading it may offer some educative value--I for one learned a Biblical allusion new to me, "the law of the Medes and Persians," which is presented in this story as if it is a commonplace (maybe it was in 1950s England?) and perhaps other readers will encounter words or references new to them.

Finally, a shout out to luminist.org, where I read a scan of Science Fantasy Volume 6, Number 17, having been unable to find a scan at the internet archive.

"The Guest Rites" by Robert Silverberg (1957)

Here we bear witness to Merril making a little mistake or maybe bending the rules a bit.  The list from which we are drawing her recommendations appears at the end of her 1957 anthology SF: The Year's Greatest Science-Fiction and Fantasy: Second Annual Volume, and it indicates that "The Guest Rites" appeared in Infinity Science Fiction in February 1956, when in fact it appeared in the February 1957 issue, an issue with a great cover by Emsh that brings to beautiful life such beloved SF elements as zero gravity, sexy spacesuits and their sexy inhabitants, colorful nebulae, and high tech equipment.  We'll read "The Guest Rites" anyway, of course.

Silverberg's is one of those stories that contrasts the wise aliens who are in touch with nature with us humans who are greedy and racist jerk offs.  The story starts at a Venusian temple in the desert; an exhausted Earthman stumbles by, saying he has been lost in the starless desert as he has lost his compass.  The Venusian main character, a monk or priest of the religion that worships the planet itself, offers him endless hospitality, as his religion obliges him to.  But then a cleric from another temple nearby comes by and explains that the human enjoying shelter here is a thief--he stole the eye of the statue of the cyclops god Venus at that temple and ran off, accidentally leaving his compass behind.

On the one hand, such sacrilege is punishable by death, but on the other hand, the thief has been offered the hospitality required by the god that is Venus--how to reconcile this legalistic theological dilemma?  The Venusian clergymen trust that Venus will show the way.  Sure enough, without his compass, the human cannot find his way out of the desert to a Terran settlement; try as he might, he always ends up back at the temple.  The felonious Earthman is doomed to live out the rest of his life in this temple.  When he dies in a few decades, which will seem short to the long-lived Venerians, the priests will retrieve the lost eye.  The human of course tries to bribe a kitchen boy to guide him out of the desert, but unlike us lucre-loving Earth jerks, Venusians don't care about money!  (Don't ask me how the Venusian economy works--these jokers all live in a desert in a temple and spend all day praying and profess to care not a whit about money, so how did they get all these temples built and how do they acquire the food they generously offer any strangers who come by?)

Acceptable filler.  Presumably Merril liked its anti-colonial, anti-Western attitude.  "Guest Rites" would have to wait until the 21st century to be reprinted by Armchair Fiction in their 2011 Science Fiction Gems: Volume Two.  

"Sales Resistance" by Henry Still (1956)

Still has ten credits at isfb.  "Sales Resistance" appeared in If alongside Frank Riley's "Project Hi-Psi," another Merril recommendation which we recently read, one which I liked.  

Here we have another anti-capitalism story.  And unlike Silverberg's story, which is sort of structured as an adventure or horror tale, this is an absurdist satire in which salesmen are the priests of the late 21st century, Pulitzer prizes are awarded to ad campaigns and the hit songs are all sales jingles.  Good grief.  

Perry Mansfield is an oddball non-conformist in the consumerist future.  When a salesman named Marlboro (oy, the joke names) comes to his house to sell him a machine that can use invisible rays of force to cook his food, clean and decorate his house, and even shave and dress him, he refuses to buy one.  This is sacrilege, so later that day Perry is in court, where the lawyers and jury are all computers.  The punch card spat out by the jury declares him guilty and the human judge sentences him to buying the machine.  Back home he goes into a rage and destroys the machine (a scene illustrated with vim and vigor by Emsh, who is shaping up to be the star performer of today's blog post) and so he is carted off to the loony bin.

Banal and lame, maybe lefties who enjoy looking down their noses at our market society would find "Sales Resistance" to be acceptable filler, but I am giving it a thumbs down.   

"Sales Resistance" itself seems to have been unable to penetrate the sales resistance of the world's SF editors after its initial sale to If; apparently it has never been reprinted. 

"Fear is a Business" by Theodore Sturgeon (1956)

Here's the second Sturgeon story Merril recommended in her "Honorable Mention" list in the back of SF: The Year's Greatest Science-Fiction and Fantasy: Second Annual Volume.  (Merril also printed a Sturgeon story in her 1957 anthology, "The Other Man," which we read last year.)  Since debuting in F&SF, "Fear is a Business" has been widely anthologized, including in Robert P. Mills' A Decade of Fantasy and Science Fiction and  Flying Saucers, edited by Isaac Asimov, Martin H. Greenberg, and Charles G. Waugh.

"Fear is a Business" is another absurd satire, another attack on our capitalist way of life, and another story featuring goodie goodie aliens who serve as a foil that points out how bad are us humans.  Gadzooks!  Ted includes some of his favorite themes, like collective consciousness and how it is awesome, and even shoehorns in some pretty out-there sex.  There are also lots of jokes, and plenty of references to recent and current events (e.g., Huey Long, Joe McCarthy, the 1948 communist coup in Czechoslovakia, and the Air Force's report on UFOs) that are sometimes serious and other times fuel for topical jokes.  We might also see "Fear is a Business" as a satire of L. Ron Hubbard and Dianetics, and even a sort of prefiguring of the response to Robert Heinlein's Stranger in a Strange Land.

Phillipso is a successful writer of advertising copy.  One day, because he needs an excuse for skipping work, he claims he met aliens and fought them off, even faking a saucer landing site by marking the ground with a blowtorch he happens to have in his car.  By coincidence, the first person to see the marks and hear his story is a journalist, and soon Philsy boy is famous and rich, a publisher having asked him to write a book about his experience and legions of fans wanting to hear him speak.  He becomes essentially the leader of a cult known as the Temple of Space.

On page four of the 14-page story a real space alien contacts Phillipso, appearing as an image of an ordinary human projected from his hovering spacecraft into Phillipso's office because what the aliens really look like would be more shocking than Phillipso could take.  This alien wants to end war and crime and disease and poverty on Earth, but he can't because Phil's book has made everybody assume aliens are hostile--the alien seeks to persuade Phil to publicly retract all the stuff he has said about aliens.  When Phil expresses doubts that the alien has the wherewithal to solve all of Earth's problems, the alien proves his power by using hypnotism or something to make Phil fuck himself.  (Sturgeon doesn't type "fuck himself," but instead "something proverbial, unprintable, but not quite impossible.  He didn't want to do it--with all his mind and soul he did not want to, but he did it nonetheless.")  The alien then talks a little about his means of radically improving life on Earth.  He proposes that in his next book, Phillipso include plans the alien can provide for constructing a simple device that will facilitate the rise of a collective consciousness among all mankind; the text will claim the device is a weapon that will protect the builder from the aliens.  Collective consciousness would make language obsolete and lying impossible, which the alien says is awesome but which Phil says will overturn our entire culture and economy, which he admits are built on language and deception.

Three pages form the end, the alien leaves Phillipso and our guy ponders helping the E.T. bring peace and prosperity and collective consciousness to Earth.  But then he gets calls from that journalist and then his publisher which spur him to forget all about helping bring about paradise on Earth and instead continue his grift.         

This story is not very good.  Its jokes are not funny, its themes and ideas are tired, the plot is shaky (though I guess in a satire that doesn't mater) and as for the structure of the thing, most of it is a tendentious conversation, like an annoying Socratic dialogue or something.  The twisted horror scene in which the alien makes Phil (apparently) have anal sex with himself makes the personality of the alien and the whole tone of the story jarringly inconsistent.  The alien is all about peace and love and empathy, but he inflicts this horrendous trauma on Phillipso:

He fell back into his chair, sobbing with rage, fear and humiliation.  When he could find a word at all, it came out between the fingers laced over his scarlet face and was "Inhuman...."

Why didn't Sturgeon have the alien demonstrate his power by fixing some minor medical issue Philsy boy had, like near-sightedness or a heart murmur or a hangnail or something?  Sturgeon seems aware of how ill-fitting this episode is, having Phillipso point out what the alien just did to him when the alien says he won't just conquer the Earth and make us behave because "We couldn't force even one human to do what we want done," but the alien just dismisses Phil's objection with the suggestion that it hurt him more than it hurt Phillipso, a sort of stock joke.

I'm giving "Fear is a Business" a thumbs down, but I can see how lefties who like joke stories might enjoy it; most importantly, Sturgeon is a good writer and I can't deny that all the individual sentences and paragraphs of the story are each a smooth and easy read, even if what they add up to is weak.


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More than anything, these four stories demonstrate the gulf between what I look for in a story and what Merril, it seems, looks for.  I don't want lame jokes, I don't want absurdist satires, and I don't want recitations of the same tired criticisms of our individualistic market society I've already heard a million times.  Of these four stories, Silverberg comes closest to delivering what I seek from fiction, as he at least tries to portray real human feeling and drama.  I am sympathetic to what Shaw tried to do in his story, but it just was not enjoyable or enlightening.        

Well, maybe Merril and I will be on the same page more often once we leave the "S"s behind and start exploring the "T"s, "U"s and "W"s in the next episode of this long series on the SF of 1956.

Speaking of which, use the links below to check out any earlier stages on this journey you may have missed.

Monday, February 20, 2023

The Ceres Solution by Bob Shaw

The halting words gave Gretana an intuitive and empathetic glimpse into a life other than her own, a life claustrophobically bounded by dark palisades of sickness and pain and all the wretched parameters of Earth, yet one which was lit from within by courage and imagination.  And she, Gretana ty Iltha, had once regarded herself as the unluckiest creature in the universe because of a slight disproportion of her features.

I feel like it has been a while since I have read a serious outer space-focused piece of science fiction with space suits and space stations and speculations on what life will be like in the future.  I've had good experiences with Bob Shaw's fiction in the past*, and there is a Vincent Di Fate space station and the invocation (albeit somewhat disparaging) of science guy Arthur C. Clarke on the cover of my DAW copy of 1984's The Ceres Solution, so let's give that a try.

*"Light of Other Days," "A Full Member of the Club," Tomorrow Lies in AmbushOrbitsvilleNight WalkFire PatternOne Million TomorrowsWho Goes Here?

The Prologue of the 185-page book introduces us to Denny Hargate, a bitter and sarcastic boy who is suffering a debilitating disease.  One day he limps over on his crutches to a clearing in the woods of upstate New York (Shaw is British, but his setting and main character are American, which makes the Anglicisms--like how Denny is intimately familiar with William Blake's "Jerusalem"--that creep in a little jarring) that he thinks of as his special place; there he sees a beautiful young woman and watches while she looks to the sky, waves her hand in the air, and vanishes.

As the main text begins we are introduced to an advanced interstellar human society centered on planet Mollan.  Mollanians live for four or five thousand years, and their culture is Mollanian society has a culture characterized by a rigid definition of beauty, such that our female lead, Gretana, who is a little short and has a face of below average looks, finds seeing her reflection in a mirror or a glass surface disturbing and has developed elaborate and exacting strategies of how to hold her head and manipulate her facial muscles so that she always looks her best.  Because of her "physical shortcomings" she is relegated to a lower social class and will not be able to have children. 

Mollanians are emotionally attuned and intellectually aware of the many "lines of force" which crisscross the universe and can teleport between the "nodes" where these lines intersect by thinking of complex mathematical formulae.  Via "major nodes," of which planets typically have a half dozen or so, people can travel interstellar distances, and almost 200 planets host human populations, descendants of teleport-capable human colonists.  Due to successive collapses of civilizations on both the interstellar and planetary levels, many of these populations, including that of Earth, have no memory of their alien origin and lack the ability to teleport.  The Mollanian Bureau of Wardens studies these planetbound populations secretly, hoping to learn by observing them why human civilizations always eventually collapse, and prevent the collapse of the Mollanian civilization.

Gretana is recruited by the handsome top Warden, Vekrynn, to work for the Bureau on Earth.  Hundreds of thousands of years of independent evolution mean Earth humans and Mollanians look very different, so Gretana will have to get extensive cosmetic surgery so she can blend in.  As a sort of quasi-illegal reward for her service, when her tour of duty on Earth is over and Gretana's face is reconstructed the surgery will not restore her current unsightly facial structure but give her a face that will conform to her society's rigorous standards of beauty--she will have very high class status and, Vekrynn suggests, be able to move in lofty social strata which high status people like Vekrynn himself call home.  Such inducements to serve on Earth are necessary because the Mollanians, among whom poverty, war and crime are almost entirely unknown, consider Earth, where people live for less than a century and want and violence are common, a horrifying place.

Gretana arrives on Earth in 2002, teleporting into that clearing in upstate New York we saw in the Prologue, which is one of the handful of major nodes on Earth.  (It feels special to Denny because his subconcious can dimly perceive the node.)  American society is a total mess due to overpopulation, environmental degradation, and tensions with the still-extant Soviet Union, with rampant crime, terrorism, and endemic labor strikes.  The U.S. government strongly discourages private travel, blocking the highways and striving to relegate all commerce and passenger traffic to the unreliable public nuclear-powered rail network.  

Gretana's cosmetic surgery has made her look like a real Earthling, and, unexpectedly, one of considerable beauty (measured by Terran standards), which causes her some complications.  Her job on Earth is simply to live the low key life of a middle-class person of independent means and no regular job, observing Earth life and every few months teleporting from that upstate NY node to a Mollanian outpost twenty light years away to have her memories downloaded for Vekrynn's files.  It was Gretana whom Denny saw a few years after her arrival on Earth, teleporting away to one of these downloading sessions.  

We readers catch up with Denny in 2024.  Now in his early thirties, Denny is confined to a wheel chair, half of his face is paralyzed, and the doctors think he only has a few years to live.  Inspired by the way the beautiful woman in the clearing had waved her hand in the air, drawing a series of curves, Denny has become an expert in the mathematics of curves, and lands a job on Earth's single space station, an international project of the Western powers.  There is hope that living in a low-gee environment will extend Denny's life span.

As the middle third of the novel begins it becomes evident that there is a diversity of views among Mollanians about Earth.  Verkynn, head of the Bureau of Wardens has a strict policy of nonintervention--Mollanians are to keep their presence secret from humans and observe, not interfere, as any effort to help the Earth will spoil the data they are collecting.  (Shaw directly refers to the "uncertainty principle.")  But we witness a Mollanian sabotage the space station, forcing its evacuation and an end to the Earth's space program (the Western governments are too cash strapped to finance any repairs.)  And a fellow Warden breaks all of Verkynn's rules and contacts Gretana--Lorrest is the leader of a pro-intervention faction of Wardens who want to help Earth people--while Verkynn and Gretana have refused to become emotionally involved with Terrans, this guy admires Earth people and has gone native.  He wants Gretana's help, or so he says, but Gretana, like almost all Mollanians, is a conservative rule-follower and implicitly trusts her benefactor Verkynn, and, instead of joining the rebels, hurries to the upstate node to report her contact with Lorrest.  When Gretana gets to the node she finds Denny there--with the possibility of living in space denied him, Denny has come to his special place to commit suicide by exposing himself to the elements (it is winter.)  Gretana does something no Mollanian has ever done before--she teleports the near-death Denny along with herself to the Mollanian outpost 20 light years away.   

In the final third of The Ceres Solution Denny and Gretana become directly involved in the struggle between the mainstream Wardens led by Verkynn and Lorrest's interventionist faction.  Which faction will Gretana side with when the leaders of both seem to be acting kind of crazy?  How will wheelchair-bound Denny fare on alien planets?  The dramatic "solution" of the title is revealed to us.  One reason Earth humans have so many problems is because the Moon is so big and so close to Terra that it interferes with those networks of force that are such a prominent feature of this novel, causing all kinds of disruption to our genetic make up.  Some Mollanians want to take Ceres and propel it into Luna, blasting the moon to bits and regularizing Earth's relationship with all those lines and nodes of force.

Shaw is a good writer and The Ceres Solution is a good novel.  The personalities of Denny and Gretana are are interesting and believable, and the worlds they inhabit, crisis-ridden early 21st-century Earth and the Mollanian culture of people who live to be 5,000 years old but are paralyzed by a fear of death, are well-drawn and absorbing.  Shaw's speculations about such things as how lifespan drives culture--for example, how Mollanian buildings have only one story because nobody wants to risk falling to his death and thus forfeiting thousands of years of life, but we short-lived Terrans cover our planet with towering skyscrapers--and the philosophical issues he addresses--is a brief life of challenge or a long life of peace to be preferred? to what extent should the superior interfere in the lives of the inferior?--are clever and thought-provoking.  I am sick of those SF stories in which the aliens are treehugging greens or utopian pinkos or free-lovin' swingers or peace-lovin' peaceniks and are used by the author to denounce how Americans or Earthlings in general are despoilers of the environment or money grubbing capitalists or uptight prudes or warmongering war pigs, and so I liked how Shaw tried to portray both virtue and vice among, and pros and cons about, both Earth people and the Mollanians.  The network of force and the attendant system of teleporting, the van Vogt-style two-competing-secret-factions-of superior-beings-are-deciding-the-fate-of-Earth plot, the various high-tech devices, and the wish fulfillment elements (you are both a total loser and a genius and then a gorgeous girl comes out of nowhere to make life worth living) are all fun.  The action and suspense scenes are successful.  There are many reasons to praise this thing.

So a big thumbs up for Bob Shaw and The Ceres Solution!

Don't let these Continental covers fool you:
Mollanians have almost no interest in sex or family, and Denny Hargate has
been rendered impotent by disease

Thursday, July 28, 2022

Dagger of the Mind by Bob Shaw

Leila!  I killed Leila!  I'm not the person I always believed myself to be.  I'm a murderer!

Today on MPorcius Fiction Log, we take my copy of Ace's 1982 paperback printing of Bob Shaw's 1979 novel Dagger of the Mind off the shelf and embark on an adventure which, if the covers of the book are any indication, involves a guy fighting a blob with Molotovs.  Sounds good!

Dagger of the Mind is a story about a telepath; we seem to read about telepaths a lot here at MPorcius Fiction Log--we even ended up reading about telepaths when the plan was to read grim crime fiction.  But let's just run with it.

John Redpath is an Englishman, an epileptic who lives in an apartment building on a busy road above a row of shops.  He works at the nearby Institute, where they are experimenting on him, studying the effect of drugs on his slight telepathic abilities.  The story begins on a morning on which he feels quite odd, and when he looks out the spyhole in his apartment door he sees a hideous visage, the bloody face of a man who has apparently been skinned alive!  (The cover of the Pan edition of the novel seems to be trying to illustrate this.)  When he opens the door there is nobody there!  Are the drugs driving him insane?  

As the day proceeds, more reasons to believe Redpath is going bonkers crop up.  He is having a casual relationship with a promiscuous scientist who works in a different department of the Institute, Leila Mostyn, and he begins having irrepressible feelings of jealousy and possessiveness about her which quickly escalate into a violent rage.  Is Redpath's personality changing?  He continues to have hallucinations, and abruptly decides to make major life changes, quitting his job and finding a new place to live.  Could his horrifying visions and changes in character be a reaction to the experimental drugs, or is his psychic ability picking up thoughts from other people, as one of the researchers at the Institute suggests?  The climax of the first third of the novel sees Redpath murder Mostyn just after deciding he was truly in love with her.  After fleeing the scene of the crime, Redpath falls asleep in his new apartment in a disreputable house full of questionable characters who are extremely friendly to him; when he wakes up he finds himself in a similar house in the United States!

Dagger of the Mind is kind of dull and flat.  Redpath is not a very interesting character--Shaw actually takes pains to remind you he is ordinary and unremarkable, outside his epilepsy and his (quite weak) telepathy--and none of the other people in the book are interesting, either.  There are many pages devoted to descriptions of the visions that could be dreams or hallucinations or others' thoughts, and Shaw also describes at great length quotidian details of architecture, interior design, and the natural world--the pebbled glass of a window, the sunlight reflecting off this or casting shadows of that, etc.--and these details don't add up to a mood or paint fascinating images, they just bog the reader down.

Because the text wasn't doing much to hold my interest, I was disappointed when Shaw decisively undermined the most exciting thing that happened in the beginning of the book--Redpath's murder of the female lead--by returning the scene to suburban England and revealing that Mostyn had not been killed; Redpath had just cut up her apartment in her absence.  If Shaw had got me to like Redpath or Mostyn, or at least excited some curiosity about them, maybe this would have been a cause for relief, but instead I was disappointed that the most dramatic and compelling thing in the book had not actually happened.  

Redpath wakes up back in Britain, and there is some detective stuff as he talks to the police and Institute staff and everybody tries to figure out what is going on.  In the final third of the book, Redpath has a telepathic epiphany and suddenly realizes exactly what is up.  Decades ago, an alien criminal or revolutionary fled to Earth.  This renegade's species are big blobs with psychic powers that eat keratin, which is what your skin and hair are made of.  (That is why in his visions--some of which are not visions at all but real life--our boy Redpath has been seeing people and animals denuded of their skin.)  The alien fugitive was afraid to use his psychic powers very much because that might expose him to detection by the forces of the establishment pursuing him, so, from his hiding place in an English basement, he has been giving humans psychic powers and hypnotizing them into serving him.  Redpath is one of the people the alien gave psi powers years ago, when as a kid he was in the alien's neighborhood, and this novel's bizarre events are related to the monster using its powers to summon Redpath to join his team of human slaves.  You see, the overly friendly weirdos in the house he has moved to are that team, one a guy who can teleport, one a guy who can see the future, and so on; their telepath recently died, and they need Redpath to round out the roster.

This is bad enough, but Redpath realizes, via telepathic insight, that even worse developments are in store.  The conservative forces vengefully pursuing the alien rebel have finally caught up to him, and in a day or so are going to bomb England into oblivion.  Redpath has to slay the monster in the basement fast to prevent the destruction of his home country and an interruption of the world's supply of authentic Marmite.  Redpath tries to get Mostyn to help him, but this book was written before the current feminist era and her half-hearted efforts to aid him come to nothing, though Shaw tries to add suspense to his book by having us follow her for many pages on her abortive trip to America before, in the face of some mundane obstacles, she abandons her assigned task of being the New World prong of Redpath's planned Molotov pincer movement.  Luckily, one of the alien's slaves--the teleporter guy--resists the monster's control and he and Redpath together destroy the beast and the forces of justice in orbit above call off their attack.  As the story ends Redpath decides that he will pretend all this never happened and it looks like Mostyn is going to settle down and marry him, confident that his crazy ideas about aliens and teleporting human slaves--which she never believed--were drug induced.

Dagger of the Mind works on a mechanical level as a detective story; when in the end all the crazy stuff that has happened are explained, we see that all the plot elements mesh and make internal sense.  Shaw also comes up with clever little schemes and ploys for the alien and Redpath and the teleporting slave to put into operation.  For example, reminding us of Fredric Brown's "Arena," in which a guy knocked himself unconscious as a means of getting through a forcefield, Redpath has the idea of triggering one of his epileptic seizures as a means of breaking free of the psychic influence of the alien.  The actual SF elements of Dagger of the Mind are OK.  

But Dagger of the Mind does not work as entertainment or literature; the cool SF stuff takes up very little of the word count, and Shaw fails to captivate or move the reader via style or characters.  Leila Mostyn has no personality, doesn't really contribute to the plot (the alien makes Redpath hallucinate killing her in order to drive him away from the Institute and his apartment and into the arms of the team of slaves, but some other hallucination would have worked just as well) and Shaw fails to offer any plausible reason why Redpath is in love with her and why she might want to marry him.  The rebel alien, the pursuing alien, and the human slave who can teleport and who resists the alien could all have been compelling characters with interesting personalities and motivations if Shaw had gone to the trouble of fleshing them out, but they get very little screen time, so they are just gears rotating in Shaw's mechanical plot.  I didn't care who lived or died and I didn't care who had sex with who or who was going to marry who. 

I have enjoyed Shaw's work in the past, but this one didn't hold my interest, and often when I would sit down to read it I would find myself instead rereading randomly selected installments of Rumiko Takahashi's Urusei Yatsura.  I'm afraid I have to give Dagger of the Mind a marginal thumbs down.  You hate to see it.       

Some interesting (maybe?) notes.  Shaw fills Dagger of the Mind with cultural references both high-falutin', like those to Shakespeare and Van Gogh, and popular, including nods to the TV show The Tomorrow People and the 1945 film Scared Stiff.  Redpath likes old movies, apparently, and in his italicized thoughts refers to a dozen or more actors, many of whom I didn't recognize.     

A scan of the Pan edition of Dagger of the Mind is available at the internet archive, and a brief look indicates that at least one change (beyond the typical spelling and punctuation changes) was made to the text in the production of the American edition I own.  What appears as "World War II" in my 1982 Ace printing is "Second World War" in the 1981 Pan.  Why the publisher felt the need to change this easily understood phrase, but left unmolested "saloon car" (we Yanks say "sedan") and "kitchen tissue" (US: "paper towels") is a mystery.

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Behold, links to coverage of Bob Shaw here at MPorcius Fiction Log that is more sympathetic than is today's:

"Light of Other Days"

"A Full Member of the Club"

Tomorrow Lies in Ambush

Orbitsville

Night Walk

Fire Pattern

One Million Tomorrows 

Who Goes Here?

Thursday, May 13, 2021

1966 stories by Bob Shaw, Avram Davidson, Frederik Pohl and Brian Aldiss

I have to wonder about the discussion behind the decision to drop
 Davidson's name and replace it with Lafferty's on the cover.

In 1970, Ace republished its paperback anthology World's Best Science Fiction: 1967, edited by Donald A. Wollheim and Terry Carr, under the title World's Best Science Fiction: Third Series.  I own a copy of World's Best Science Fiction: Third Series, so let's crack 'er open and check out well-regarded stories from 1966 by authors we care about here at MPorcius Fiction Log.

"Light of Other Days" by Bob Shaw

"Light of Other Days" made its debut in John W. Campbell's Analog, and it seems to have been a huge hit--it looks like almost every famous SF editor--Judith Merril, Damon Knight, Robert Silverberg, Martin H. Greenberg, Brian Aldiss, and James Gunn, as well as Campbell, Wollheim and Carr--included it in an anthology at some point.  "Light of Other Days" is in at least three books I own, but this will be the first time I read it.

Judith Merril, in my copy of SF 12, stresses in her intro and afterword to "Light of Other Days" that Shaw's story is "actually science fiction" (her italics): it presents a new idea about light and time and the effects of technology on human life, and isn't just a detective story or action tale set on another planet or outer space.  Perhaps more importantly for those of us who care more about sex and death than particles and waves is the fact that this story is a total heartbreaker about disastrous love relationships! 

Shaw's new scientific idea is "slow glass," sheets of glass through which light passes very slowly.  A new piece of slow glass (AKA a "scenedow") is black as night, because no light has yet passed through it.  But if the pane is, say, "one-year-thick," after it has stood for a year a person looking at the glass will see through it what happened in its environs a year ago.  This has great decorative value, as one can take a five-year-thick scenedow that has stood on a tropical beach or before a bucolic meadow for five years and bring it to his city apartment and for the next five years enjoy a 100% authentic view of natural beauty, the pane of glass displaying all the vagaries of weather and season and animal life in a country spot of the recent past while living in the middle of the metropolis.

Personally I loved city life, was thrilled to see skyscrapers and subway trains every day, and find living in the country where I see cows and tractors every day an endless source of dismay, but it is normal to assert the opposite and Shaw in this story exploits that typical attitude--scenedows are big business, as city dwellers yearn to decorate their apartments with living country views.  (Presumably somebody like me could get a scendeow of Times Square or the Manhattan skyline for his camel-cricket-infested country house.)

On to the heartbreak.  Our narrator is a poet in an unhappy marriage; he and his wife are sick of each other (he even admits to hoping she will be killed in an accident) and their misery is compounded by the fact that they are expectant parents.  (I guess nowadays the narrator's wife would just get an abortion, but in Britain in 1966 legal restrictions on abortion were pretty strict and it was more common to think of a fetus as a human being and not just some nuisance to be casually destroyed like the camel crickets in my new home--at least that is the idea I got from watching Michael Caine's finest film, Alfie.)

The narrator and his wife are in Scotland on a vacation (they say "holiday," of course) and the narrator wants to buy a scendow from some old dude who lives in an old farmhouse overlooking a loch.  Shaw skillfully foreshadows the depressing revelation that comes at the end: this guy's wife and child were killed in an automobile accident some years before, but their last few years were recorded by one of his pieces of slow glass, and he has set it up in a window of the farm house to provide the illusion that they are still alive.  I believe Shaw gives us room to hope that this demonstration of love and the fragility of life will trigger some kind of reformation in the attitudes of the narrator and his wife and save their marriage.

Shaw handles both the science/technology stuff and the human drama stuff quite well in this short and pungent story--I have to concur with all those editors: "Light of Other Days" is very good.  Recommended!

Two German anthologies which include "Light of Other Days;"
"Nymphenburger" is going to be my new pet name for my wife


"Bumberboom" by Avram Davidson

This one first appeared in F&SF, where it was the cover story--the story title may not be on the cover, but the cover illo was inspired by "Bumberboom" and Davidson's name is at the top of the list of contributors, even above those of icon Isaac Asimov and MPorcius fave Thomas Disch.  (The back cover of this issue of F&SF has a charming ad for the magazine featuring testimonials not only from SF pioneer Hugo Gernsback and three literary/journalistic guys you never heard of, but jazz titan Louis Armstrong!)  The editor of F&SF, Edward L. Ferman, included "Bumberboom" in an anthology of the best stories from his magazine, and Gardner Dozois in 2000 also anthologized it in The Furthest Horizon: SF Adventures to the Far Future.

"Bumberboom" immediately reminded me of a Jack Vance Dying Earth thing, with its feudalistic far future in which people fight with swords and believe in magic and farcically haughty rapscallions communicate in elaborately embroidered deceptions and highly ornamented rodomontades: 

"Important matters," he said, importantly, holding up his chin so that his jowls withdrew, "are not to be discussed where every lack-work may gawp at an inoffensive visitor.  Come along with me, my young, and I will not scruple to take time away from my many important affairs and inform you."  

Mallian, a sort of Cugel figure, is a prince ("son Hazelip, High Man to the Hereditor of Land Qanaras") travelling on foot, on a quest for some kind of "medicine," which in this context means "magic" or "knowledge," needed to succor his native land.  (This quest is never resolved--maybe "Bumberboom" was meant to be one of a series of stories about Mallian.)  While he is passing through the Land of the Dwerfs (who are short) on his way to the Land of Elver State (where people wear caps with fake ears attached to them), from atop a high hill Mallian sees that the Bumberboom Juggernaut is following a course similar to his own, though on a different road.  Bumberboom is a huge artillery piece, laboriously propelled by hand by its Crew, an army of inbred imbeciles (as a kid I would have called them "retards.")  From natives of the Land of the Dwerfs and The Land of Elver State Mallian learns that Bumberboom has been crisscrossing this region for generations, and everywhere it goes people surrender food to the idiotic Crew, in fear of the implicit threat represented by the monstrous gun.  We readers, and Mallian, soon realize the Crew members, who are so stupid they can barely talk, are totally incapable of operating the weapon their ancestors apparently designed, built and employed to terrorize the countryside.  Mallian makes himself master of the Crew with ease (through violence), figures out how to operate the gun (there are longish scenes of making gunpowder and firing the gun's first shot in generations, which providentially reveals the burial place of the Statue of Liberty), and then tries to use the gun to conquer a region where there is no formal government--due to negligence he fails and the Juggernaut is knocked out of action, permanently.

"Bumberboom" is an "actual" science fiction story, in that it is about a smart guy who tries to achieve his goals through intelligence and knowledge of science, and an adventure story in that there is a quest, conflict and danger, but the science is pretty elementary (class, what are the three ingredients of gunpowder?) and the adventure is not thrilling.  I believe Davidson meant the story's strengths to be its rococo dialogue and his efforts at humor.  Because the fancy style is more of an obstacle than a source of pleasure, and the jokes are not funny (sample joke: an inbred moron gets run over and killed by the vehicle his idiot relatives are pushing), I have to give this overly long exercise a thumbs down.

The only thing that is really good about "Bumberboom," and probably the most noteworthy thing about it, is that it is a hardcore anti-government and anti-taxation story.  Mallian the prince is a thief who dominates others through duplicity, threats and direct violence.  The governments of the Dwerfs and Elvers are portrayed as incompetent and tyrannical.  The towns of the ungoverned zone are prosperous, their citizens characterized by foresight, alacrity and independence, as well as a sense of fun.  If only this welcome message was embedded in a more entertaining story--we aren't going to beat the commies with mediocre stories like this one!



"Day Million" by Frederik Pohl

This five-page piece is one of those gimmicky and tendentious experimental New Wave stories in which the author speaks directly to the reader in a smart-alecky fashion and abandons all traditional story-telling concerns like suspension of disbelief, plot, character, etc.  This story is almost all exposition and cantankerous in-your-face argument.  

The point of the story is that people ten thousand years from now will be very different from today, almost incomprehensible to us (the last line of the story reminds us that Attila the Hun and Tiglath-Pileser would find mid-20th century middle-class American office workers very strange) and that all our opinions and attitudes, like what we find sexually attractive, are irrational and arbitrary.  Pohl posits that in that far future it will be routine to radically physically alter people's bodies, starting in the womb, and as an example presents omicron-Dibase seven-group totter-oot S Doradus 5314, who as a zygote had XY chromosomes but has since been modified to have mammary glands, ovaries and a vagina, as well as gills and a tail and a silky pelt--the mature "Dora" is a transwoman furry who lives underwater.

Pohl offers a second example of an altered person, Dora's lover, a cyborg who has travelled to a thousand different star systems.  These two meet only once, but trade electronic simulacra of themselves ("mathematical analogues") with whom to later have sex via simulation computers ("symbol manipulators") they plug directly into their brains.

Proponents of the story can argue that it is prophetic, seeing as we all now live in a world in which we are enjoined to celebrate sex changes and anticipate designer babies and integration into computers, where millions of people spend their free time masturbating while watching internet porn or playing hentai computer games, but "Day Million" fails as a piece of literature or entertainment--it is an idea, not a story.  

Despite my thinking "Day Million" little more than a waste of time, it has been reprinted a million times and is considered to be one of Pohl's best stories--among the many places it has reappeared are a collection for which it is the title story, an "author's choice" anthology, and a Pohl "best of" collection.  "Day Million" first appeared in the men's magazine Rogue, which seems appropriate because it is more like an article speculating on the future of sex and the family that advocates acceptance of sexual minorities than an actual work of fiction.

"Amen and Out" by Brian W. Aldiss

It is the future!  Our story is set in a vast automated city run by an army of robots and machines and inhabited by a small number of humans.  Beyond the city lie the space ports from which are launched the automated spaceships that explore the universe, but in the heart of the city humans conduct experiments and explorations.  Hundreds of elderly people who have been given immortality drugs lounge in and around warm indoor pools, wretchedly weak, their emaciated bodies covered in strange patterns, a side effect of the drugs.  These men and women, the "immortals" or "Immies" who have aged beyond one hundred and fifty years, have "penetrated the senility barrier" and spend all their time thinking, coming up with all manner of wacky theories.  The Immies are regularly interviewed, because among the dross of all the useless ideas sometimes crops up a revolutionary idea of tremendous value.

Most of the main characters of this seventeen-page story work at the Immortality Investigation Project, and we follow them on a typical day as they wake up and go to work and pursue their duties.  Theirs is a religious society, and all of them, even the LSD-addicted homeless man who comes to visit one particular Immortal, his great-great-great-great-greatuncle (give or take a great or two), are in close contact with their Gods, with whom they communicate directly via desktop and pocket computers they call "shrines."  These Gods seem to know all and offer advice to the dissatisfied ("You must build your own confidence bit by bit....Resolve to use your own judgement at least once today...") and admonitions to the ill-disciplined ("You wenched and fornicated yesterday night: in consequence you will be late on the project today.")     

After introducing us to the setting and characters, Aldiss gives us a few pages of plot that satisfyingly tie everything together--all the background stuff turns out to be significant.  The Immies are pathetically weak and have an irresistible psychological need to be near water (there is a lot of mumbo jumbo about how this is because life came from the sea and the womb is wet and so forth) and so none has ever left the Immortality Investigation Project's precincts, but the LSD addict tries to spirit away his great-great-etc. uncle to an abandoned country house with a big pool where he and other itinerents are squatting.  The escape comes off, and Aldiss gives the reader reason to believe its success is a result of the Gods having set up a Rube Goldberg contraption of psychological manipulations of the main characters.  The final sting at the end of the story that ties the whole thing up in a neat bow is the revelation of the origin of the Gods--having the computers who already basically ran the world take on the form of Gods with a direct line of communication to everybody was one of the first ideas of the Immortality Investigation Project that was put into action.

I like it.  One can see "Amen and Out" as a cynical attack on the credulity of human beings and a work advocating all-powerful technocratic world government; another big theme of the story is the value of drug-induced altered states of consciousness.  Whereas I sympathized with Davidson's apparent argument in "Bumberboom" but found his story tedious and clunky, I am pretty skeptical of what I take to be Aldiss's arguments here, but the story is well-written and smoothly structured, every component contributing to plot and atmosphere in an effective way.

After its debut in New Worlds, "Amen and Out" has been reprinted in several Aldiss collections.   


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Looking back on these stories, I think, in three of them at least, we can see a perhaps surprising theme of optimism; Shaw, Pohl and Aldiss all suggest that technology is going to make our lives better.  In "Light of Other Days" new technology brings a new source of beauty into the world and get us closer to our roots in the countryside; Pohl tells us a world in which everybody is a cyborg or a furry and has sex with computers is going to be a happy one, and Aldiss argues that replacing politicians and clergymen with computers and giving them total control of our lives will create a world without war and a civilization that will conquer the stars.  Even Davidson's anti-government "Bumberboom," in which technology is used to oppress people, has its optimistic side, as he suggests that people can get along just fine without government and ends his story by portraying a would-be tyrant being hoist by his own petard. 

More mid-Sixties SF stories in our next episode; we'll see if they are as optimistic as were today's subjects. 

Thursday, February 13, 2020

"Best" stories by James White, Bob Shaw and Brian Aldiss

Let's pull a volume off the paperback anthology shelf of the MPorcius Library and read three SF stories by British authors that appear in editor Mike Ashley's 1977 book The Best of British SF 2.  The Best of British SF 2 contains 14 stories over its 378 pages, and I have already read and blogged about two of them, Arthur C. Clarke's 1971 "Transit of Earth," and John Wyndham's "The Emptiness of Space," AKA "The Asteroids, 2194."  That leaves a dozen tales new to me; let's start with three authors of whom I already have a good opinion: James White, Bob Shaw, and Brian Aldiss.  The stories in The Best of British SF 2 by White, Shaw, and Aldiss were selected by the authors themselves and represent personal favorites, and each is preceded by an intro by Ashley that includes a long quote from the author himself which discusses such topics as narrative strategies and recurring themes in his work--these intros, along with Ashley's intro to the volume which discusses the work of British SF writers who do not have stories in the anthology, make The Best of British SF 2 particularly valuable to the student of SF from the UK.


"Tableau" by James White (1958)

I don't think I've read anything by White since I started this blog, but, in that prehistoric era when I read SF and kept my opinions about it to myself, I enjoyed White's novel All Judgement Fled (check out Joachim Boaz's review of it) and his stories "Grapeliner" and "The Lights Outside the Windows;" those two stories, I felt, had interesting and unusual takes on space travel.

isfdb lists "Tableau" as one of the earliest-written stories in White's famous and long-running Sector General stories, which, I think, are about doctors in space dealing with alien patients, or something like that.  I generally find medical stuff boring, so I have sort of avoided these stories, but today I dip my toe in the Sector General water and read this piece, which was a cover story at New Worlds during the period that periodical was edited by John Carnell and was later selected by Michael Moorcock for 1965's The Best of New Worlds.

"Tableau" starts with an italicized prologue describing an anti-war war memorial on planet Orligia, what appears to be a sculpture of the meeting of an Orligian and a human on the deck of a wrecked spacecraft; the human's guts are falling out of a wound he has suffered during a space naval battle against the alien's ship.  Then we get a narrative of the dogfight which led to the scene depicted by the memorial, and the meeting itself.  Integrated into the description of the battle and the meeting of the two pilots after their crippled ships crash land on a planet is the revelation of how the war began years ago.  The Orligians look like teddy bears, inspiring the first human to meet to be overly friendly to them, because they were so damn adorable!  This premature familiarity backfired, because we humans look like a species of carnivore that haunts Orligia and uses guile to prey on immature teddy-bear people!  In reflexive, almost involuntary,  response to the human's invading the aliens' personal space, the teddy bears killed him and his crew thus starting the war.  (This is a little like Poul Anderson's 1954 "Butch," which we just read in January, in which an alien's instincts led it to kill humans who were actually no threat to it.  "Butch" appeared in New Worlds three years before "Tableau."  Hmmm...come to think of it, Anderson, in collaboration with Gordon R. Dickson, wrote some stories of his own in the early '50s about aliens who look like teddy bears....)

"Tableau" is an anti-war story with a happy ending.  Since the start of the war, the Orligians have developed a telepathy device, and the two crash-landed pilots use one to communicate--they overcome their prejudices, and start the peace process.  "Tableau" also has a twist ending.  That memorial in the prologue is not a work of art, but the two pilots and part of a ship frozen in time by a special device; when medical science has advanced enough the pilots will be unfrozen and the human's mortal wound healed.  White explicitly stresses that these two pilots are true heroes who deserve to be celebrated because they ended the war, and the last line of the story is a reminder that "there was nothing great or noble or beautiful about war."

This story is cleverly constructed, has interesting elements (the weapons and tactics used in the space battle are quite good) and is competently written, but somehow it didn't really excite me.  The teddy-bear business is a little silly, the "this-war-has-no-villains-it-is-all-just-a-misunderstanding" business felt a little contrived, and I thought that the scenes of the telepathic discussions at the end dragged a little.  White tries to inspire in the reader a revulsion at war with his descriptions of the physical and psychological wounds suffered by the servicemen of both Earth and Orligia, but this stuff failed to move me.  I'm judging "Tableau" marginally good, though maybe my own coldness and cynicism are leading me to rate it lower than other people might.

"A Full Member of the Club" by Bob Shaw (1974)

In 2018 I read an entire book of Bob Shaw short stories, and one of them was an affectionate homage to A. E. van Vogt.  (Wikipedia suggests that Shaw's first exposure to SF was reading a story by van Vogt he found in Astounding.)  Well, here in "A Full Member of the Club" we have another story that is reminiscent of a van Vogt tale and is perhaps itself an homage to the Canadian Grandmaster.  In van Vogt's 1943 story "The Search" (later integrated in a somewhat different form into the 1970 fix-up novel Quest for the Future) a guy meets a woman who has some very high tech consumer products, including a super pen, and his investigation into these items gets him mixed up with competing factions of people from the future.*  Well, in "A Full Member of the Club" a guy notices that his girlfriend has a super efficient cigarette lighter on the same day she dumps him, and his investigation of this lighter (and other supergadgets to which she has access, including a super pen) leads him to get mixed up with space aliens!

Basically, the story is about how a bold and persistent businessman who is willing to bend or flout the rules to achieve his goals (he breaks into a mansion in one scene, for example), after discovering the existence of the super consumer goods (better tasting tobacco and coffee and more sharp TVs, as well as the super efficient lighter and other devices) obsessively leaves no stone unturned until he has figured out where the items have come from.  He finds out that aliens are teleporting the items to Earth and renting them to the very rich in exchange for Earth paintings and sculptures.  The aliens consider seizing him and sending him to outer space, but our hero is such a smooth talker and such a talented man of business that he convinces them to let him join their firm, and his contributions make their operations much more efficient and profitable. 

Shaw adds a layer of interest, and I guess what you could call satire, to the story by having the two main human characters expose themselves as shallow nouveau riche types--they care more about accessing the consumer goods and the status they represent than about love and human companionship or high culture.

For some reason (perhaps because the characters in the story are materialistic status-seekers and that is how Shaw--and maybe British people in general--see us Americans) Shaw, born in Northern Ireland and resident in England when The Best of British SF 2 was published (as noted by editor Mike Ashley in the intro to the story) set "A Full Member of the Club" in the northeast United States--Trenton, New Jersey and Philadelphia, PA and their environs--and the story includes what appear to be little mistakes, like having an American say "differently to" instead of "differently from."  Curious, I looked at the version of the story that appeared in Galaxy (you can read it at the link earlier in this blog post) and found in that version the proper Yankee lingo, "differently from."  Did Ashley or somebody else at Orbit simply fail to notice the error fixed by somebody more familiar with US English at Galaxy, or make a conscious decision to retain British usage because an accurate portrayal of US speech (which of course would be appropriate given Shaw's chosen setting and characters) might throw UK readers?   

A good story; the pacing is good, the gadgets are fun, the style engaging.  I prefer the more subtle commentary on materialism and bourgeois striving Shaw employs here to White's in-your-face "war is terrible--look, this guy's guts are falling out!" approach in "Tableau."  Similarly, in Shaw's story here, the rational way the human and alien characters go about their business feels more like how things work in real life than White's wacky "they look like teddy bears to us but we look like ghouls to them so we all act irrationally" premise.

"A Full Member of the Club" has been well received not only by me, but the wider professional SF community, Donald Wollheim including it in the 1975 edition of World's Best SF and Ellen Datlow in 2003 in her 2000-2005 webzine Sci Fiction.

*I read the magazine version of "The Search" at the internet archive today after reading "A Full Member of the Club," and found a reference to Nazis that dated the story had been altered to something more vague in the version of "The Search" that appears in my 1964 copy of Destination: Universe!  

"Manuscript Found in a Police State" by Brian Aldiss (1972)

Aldiss has a large and diverse body of work, including nonfiction and mainstream fiction as well as SF that ranges from the pretty traditional to the very experimental and New Wavey.  I have been unimpressed by some of his more pretentious or boring "literary" SF, but "Manuscript Found in a Police State," first published in the eighteenth volume of Winter's Tales, a yearly anthology of short stories edited by A. D. Maclean and published from the '50s to the early '80s, is a success.

Despite the title, this is not a first person narrative, though it does focus on one character and his thoughts and psychological state.  Axel Mathers is one among a group of people being imprisoned in Khrenabhar Mountain, in one of several thousand cells embedded in the perimeter of a colossal wheel buried deep inside the mountain.  This miles-wide wheel rotates on a huge axle when the prisoners during the daily three-hour work period all pull on chains.  It takes ten years for the wheel to make one revolution, and thus each prisoner's sentence is ten years.  Presumably this is all an allegory for life and for society, the environment in which we are all trapped, truly alone, forced to work for individual survival and destined to work together, either voluntarily or at the behest of oft inscrutable and arbitrary authorities, if any progress is to be achieved, though said progress may very well be illusory.

Aldiss describes the various ways the people about to be imprisoned respond to the prospect of their ten-year sentence, their delusions and coping mechanisms, and the impact upon their minds of solitary confinement.  We follow Mathers as he explores his cell and learns the ways of Khrenabhar Mountain and faces unforeseen circumstances, like faults in the tremendous and ancient mechanism that provide access to dangerous creatures and hold out the slim possibility of escape or at least some kind of psychological relief.  We also gradually learn about the origin of the centuries-old prison and the myth-shrouded history of Mathers's world, apparently a planet colonized by humans many generations ago who displaced a native race of primitives and set up the tyrannical state of the title, which is in a perpetual state of civil war.

As I have said on this blog before, I always enjoy the portions of adventure stories in which some guy is confined in a cell and studies the graffiti on the walls and tries to contact the other prisoners and undergoes all kinds of psychological trauma and all that, and I certainly enjoyed "Manuscript Found in a Police State."  This is no adventure story--one of the "literary" aspects of the tale is that there is no plot resolution, Mather's ultimate fate and even the true nature of the planet he lives on being quite ambiguous--but while things like self-delusion and the questions of free will are the meat of the story's themes, Aldiss includes plenty of the horror and violence and strange technology we expect in our genre fiction.  I can heartily recommend this one.

Besides here in The Best of British SF 2, "Manuscript Found in a Police State" has been reprinted in Betty Owen's 1974 Nine Strange Stories.

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Three stories worth reading, each supported by insightful ancillary matter--I'm glad I picked up The Best of British SF 2 and hopefully I'll have time to return to it in the future.