Quietus by Jonathan Beckenstein
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i’m already
goin’ down
to the end of the story now
wind is blowing
to the end of the story now
come away come away
time is bending
drifting down
spin the hourglass all around
pulverize it
spin the hourglass all around
i’m comin’ after
i’m comin’
i’m unembodied
i’m free
i’m already
leaving town
train is rounding the mountain now
got my ticket
train is rounding the mountain now
come away come away
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image from Malcom Shadrach via Unsplash
- Genre
- song
Comment by Nat Daniels
hold on... is that you singing? nice!!!! I like your vocals.. very distinctive and captivating. love the rhythm and the melody as well. Very catchy indeed x.
Comment by Jonathan Beckenstein
@user-936947521: Thank you, Frans!
Comment by Cobbled Moth Regenerated
I am sorry to hear that. But glad about the new recipes and invitation, especially in this climate
Comment by Cobbled Moth Regenerated
superb melody and harmonies, lovely lemonade out of life's lemons
Comment by ElectroTrek
Gorgeous instrumental flow, Jonathan! Your voice is a lovely retro throwback to the gentler days of the 70's! BEAUTIFUL hit! 😍😎😎😎❣🎶🔁
Comment by Alba
Great strat tone. Lovely melodic lines and really enjoying the harmonised choruses.
Comment by Luceole
Good track. Beautiful melody, well sung. 🫶✌️
Comment by bart mastin
Yet another great tune. Harmonies excellent!
Comment by Chris Pellnat
Excellent, Jonathan. Your use of vocal harmonies adds real resonance. Enjoyed the guitar tones too.
Comment by Neli CoKo
I so much like the sound of the vocal arrangement with the guitar, great harmonies
Comment by Nadine de Macedo
This sounds like from a different era. so consistent
Comment by Big Al from the Grove
Sounds like it comes from that Era when most music coming out on Vinyl was good and interesting to listen to
Comment by stonerjazz
We are so blessed, that you found your voice:):) Compliments your wonderful guitar perfectly:)
Comment by the stellar lifetimes
fantastic vocal arrangement , lighting me up good
Comment by Joe DeFlorio
Very nice , cool vocals ala Brian Wilson….
Comment by Victor Sea
I liked it! The gentle strings of the soul sounded!)
Comment by Bruce Klepper | Composer
Real nice song, Jonathan! Great vocals!
Comment by ROOTS DUBMAN
CHILL////REALLY SOMETHING TO GROOVE AND CHILL TO///DIGGGGGGGGGGGG
Comment by Frank DANA
Very good song !
Comment by Jan madsen music
excellent track ❤️
Comment by Gaz Brownie Music Projects
Yes enjoying this the flow is super them guitars & bass sound so good. Love the 60s style vocals . Great track Jonathan 👍
Comment by Paul Haas
Love this chorus!
Comment by The Windscale Blues Experiment
Superb thought-provoking song....our temporary visit to this world is an inspirational theme. Love it!
Comment by Belial Pelegrim
Lovely vocal harmonies, man...really well done
Comment by Steve Low
That's a great one - memorable melody, great voice and everything stuffed in there is adding something
Comment by MIRANDA
Wounderful song, great vocals and harmony 👍👏
Comment by Torbjørn
Sound good to me perfect blend of instruments and vocal
Comment by learningtoplay
Lovely sound throughout this song and love the way it develops and shifts.
Comment by Lammbone
The ant picture.... the song's cathartic nature of resolution of one's own mortality, the making peace with it as, borrowing from the Beatles: you've got a ticket to ride. Or maybe John Mayall: Ain't no brakeman on this train. I so like the soulful metaphysicality of this song.
Comment by Kelvin and friends
Wonderful song young fellow, excellent passages of chords and guitar arrangements, hugs k