After Swimming by Jonathan Beckenstein
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on your mark
get ready to
cannonball
into the blue
after swimming
sparkle all around you
catch the sound
breakers breaking
stop the boat
get ready to
pick a spot
to slip into
after swimming
as the sunlight bakes you
summer sips
on a sand dune
after swimming
after swimming
come swimming
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image by Leandro Crespi via Unsplash
- Genre
- summer song
Comment by Francesco Cartocci
Sorry, I'm listening to your great summer hit three months late, I was just at the beach. :)
Comment by Solsticestudiostonehenge
Very cool tune
Comment by Kurt Mottershead
Nice one, guitars sound great.
Comment by Donna Dior
Love This Vibe !!! :-)
Comment by James Geer
Guitar gets my blood going!
Comment by Frank DANA
Good song Jonathan !
Comment by the stellar lifetimes
love love LOVE that guitar pattern. it reminds me of the post rock and emo i loved in my glory days. fantastic !!
Comment by James Geer
epic build
Comment by TSM
Oh, this is fabulous! 😃👏👏
Comment by Sam Prock
Uplifting!
Comment by Sonni Quick
I lost my comment. It went 2 seconds over and disappeared!!
Comment by Luceole
Great song👌Very good arrangement 🫶✌️
Comment by lil' spaceman
im back looping tbis one. i could listen to this opening for hours...
Comment by spade13 (13R.I.P)from太陽の王国
excellent！ good harmony！
Comment by Belial Pelegrim
Amazing guitar parts and totally add to the summer flavor...great angular, refracted riffs!
Comment by Linnon
Those guitar licks roll like ocean waves (:
Comment by Victor Sea
I love your guitar!
Comment by Stricknice
Love the guitar on this Jonathan great vocals sounds like the perfect day:)
Comment by Brosco
Superb song. You really capture the theme in sound, lyrics, and image. Wonderful guitar tones.
Comment by AEGEBE
That riff stays with you. magnetic
Comment by The wrong song club
Everything about this is so mint my mate , but Christ that riff
Comment by IMRE LODBROG
quite an inspired morning... Or was it an afternoon?
Comment by Kelvin and friends
Awesome song man, pixies vibes guitar wise, and cool vocals dude!
Comment by Kelvin and friends
Fabulously discordant intro!
Comment by BRIXTON ROAD
it sounds like the opening track of what was once called a concept album
Comment by Couch King Presents
love this! so catchy with that classic indie sound with your original touch! great song crafting Jonathan!
Comment by Couch King Presents
big end of summer song! super indie pop!
Comment by Couch King Presents
awesome big anthemic intro!