Great game so far! I'm invested in the characters and where they'll go next. My one criticism - the writing is strong, sharp, natural, etc, but is also a bit too long. When I inspect an item, I generally expect like 1-4 lines of dialogue, not 5-10, or however long it felt in my head. This goes for the opening, too - it took a long time before I could even move my character around.
Ending conversation was perfect, however.