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From the crowd I spotted few familiar faces, Ottilie Bonifatus and Rihyarda. The music is using some similar instrument to harspiels but still it’s different to the real life counter part of bandura.

In this episode there is no epiphany, a lot of time has passed but the changes are very subtle. I like that it’s not explicitly said what epiphany makio’s friend had.

Asa has a conflict where she cannot express her internal state in words. as Maikio put it, she lacks vocabulary.

<Goodbye, Horrible Fiancé, Hello, Fun Magic School Life!> vol 1 - The Protagonist has so much plot armor that plot gave up and stopped trying to throw a spanner in the works. The are no stakes here. Even slice of life has more inconsequential stakes than this novel. I don’t recommend it.

On th other hand <Altina the Sword Princess> vol1 is great. Protagonist is a bottom rung officer that is sent to remote fortress to work there, where he meets Titular Princess. The only bit of magic is how she can wield comically large sword. In the oversaturation of isekai it’s quite refreshing read. The romantic duo isn’t anything new but they are written well enough. I would label this as adventure - romcom and as I like all adventures I like this.

Slippery Okuta-san fun slice of life about squid octopus girl

As I remember, the science of the 7 day lifecycle is handwaved, but the cause of cycle is plot relevant.

Only 5 chapters so far but it has already some great moments: Days Off In The Dragon’s Stomach

Taskmaster type challenge

Got that nausicaa or sabicui bisco vibe

I can recommend Ascendance of a Bookworm by Miya Kazuki

Is lemmurs the right word?

Would be cool if you added link to your comic to the post next time.

The quality is swinging widely. Some panels are amazing, and some are just quick sketches. It could work as storytelling device, but I don’t have a feeling of purpose in those swings.

This one is great!

This is one of the most degenerate manga I have come across. Gambling on the stock market isn’t my thing.

I like that it’s metal.

Totally not my genre but some better ones that I watched:

Mystery:
Odd Taxi
Stains;Gate
ID: invaded
Girl’s love:
The Magical Revolution of the Reincarnated Princess and the Genius Young Lady

I have read all 64 pages, and actually laughed out loud. After the first page that’s quite an achievement.

For anyone coming after me: just read the last chapter. It’s actually decent.

This “novel” is excellent exihibit of how humans can improve in their skill. From worst writing I have ever read to better than some published novels I had unpleastness of reading. Keep going as you will go places. Your skill has improved so much that it actually is a shame how bad the chapter 0 is.

In your place I would probably start over, and take a look how to structure a plot with twists and turns. Come up with a hook and first sentence of a book. As they say, that is most important sentence.

I love how sassy the catgirl is.

At least on scribble hub you mostly edit spelling and grammar mistakes. Not major plot points.

I have seen a re-write of the whole book, and the old version marked as draft.

The appreciating comments will come on those platforms, so your motivation will be fuelled.

I love how this anime opened, with a scene at the destination. This is a journey of hope and I love it. (I will need a good supply of tissues tho)

I love Kebab!