Sunset Girl

Characterization: Great

After deciding on the characters of the story, its good to decide their habits. How the character behaves when left alone, how the character interacts with different genders, how the character deals with happiness, anger, his Strength, weakness etc., more like a bio-data

Good things to mention :

(i) The life of the lead characters are shown

(ii) An incident happens (inciting incident (challenge or a problem))

(iii) How the inciting incident affects the characters

(iv) How the characters deal with it

(v) how their life gets changed.

By considering the budget of the film, it's a great film .....just avoiding repetitive dialogues: When the characters are talking about something throughout the script, care should be taken that they don't sound monotonous.(doctor)