Story Ave

Greetings again from the darkness. The first feature film from writer-director Aristotle Torres and co-writer Bonsu Thompson is adapted from their 2018 short film of the same title, with a boost from Sundance Labs. It's a coming-of-age story set on the streets of the Bronx, as the characters deal with grief, loss, and searching for connection and their place in this world.

High School senior Kadir (Asante Blackk, LANDSCAPE WITH INVISIBLE HAND, 2023) is emotionally crushed by his brother's death, and a sense that his mother blames him. Kadir can't handle this pressure and takes his talent as a graffiti artist and tagger to the local crew leader Skemes (Melvin Gregg, THE WAY BACK, 2020). As Kadir struggles with his desire to fit in, he's also presented an option by the school counselor to attend art school. Kadir is one of the few who actually have a shot at escaping the streets, but he's so drawn to the loyalty required to be part of the crew that he accepts Skemes assignment to rob a local at gunpoint.

With his familiar face and a presence in so many movies and TV shows since the 1980's, Luis Guzman shines as MTA Worker Luis ... the man Kadir randomly chooses to rob. However, there is more to Luis than meets the eye, and soon he has talked Kadir out of the robbery and into accepting his coat, a hot meal, and a place to sleep. This kindness confounds Kadir, but he reluctantly accepts the new father figure, though the boy is oblivious to Luis' own demons and struggles. The film's best scenes include Luis and Kadir, and sometimes Gloria (Coral Pena, CHEMICAL HEARTS, 2020), the waitress who shows off her own photographs to Kadir, in hopes of helping him understand how art can expand one's perspective.

Director Torres creates a believable environment, and rising star Asante Blackk and screen vet Luis Guzman are both terrific. Watching Guzman's character guzzle wine while he sings and dances and cooks in the kitchen is a real hoot - and a reminder that Guzman is a treasure. Luis provides a life lesson to Kadir that is bigger than the movie when he says life is messy and we are usually responsible for making our own mess. It's such a true and powerful message for so many. The only weak link here is having the main characters spell out their relationships and feelings in the final act. This shows a lack of faith in the viewers and actually weakens the ending. Otherwise, it's an easy one to appreciate.

In theaters beginning September 29, 2023.

So it like this, the movie story was not bad, but i had a problem connecting with the main characters.

Both Kadir Grayson and Luis Torres had something bad happened in their life and were suffering. Over the movie after they crossed paths, we saw them connecting and becoming good friends. But they didn't really talk that much, the kid Kadir was mostly sketching his brothers face in his scrapbook, while Luis seemed to be constantly getting drunk. They were both running from the reality, because they couldn't face it.

The movie is long enough and it could show us a little more detailed story. It just feels like the movie was missing a spark.

For many at-risk youth, there comes a turning point where they can head off in one direction or another, each with vastly different long-term outcomes. For South Bronx graffiti artist Kadir Grayson (Asante Blackk) - a gifted illustrator with real talent who's desparately struggling to find himself and reconcile his grief for the loss of his younger brother - that comes when he falls in with the wrong crowd and fails at proving himself in an unsuccessful attempt at holding up a aging but streetwise transit worker, Luis Torres (Luis Guzmán). Instead of filing charges against the confused young man, Luis takes Kadir under his wing to help him straighten out his life before it's too late. It's an uplifting and heartwarming tale, albeit somewhat clichéd and predictable at times, especially when it comes to the overlong wait for certain all-too-entirely expected revelations to surface. Nevertheless, director Aristotle Torres's debut feature provides viewers with more than its share of time-honored wisdom and hope for those who could easily end up following a different and more destructive course. The fine performances of Blackk and Guzmán convincingly sell the material, which is presented with compelling cinematography and film editing, though the sound quality can stand some improvement, particularly in the opening half-hour, when the dialogue becomes almost unintelligible at times. Still, there's much to be said for the insights served up in this intergenerational coming of age drama, proving that there's always a possibility to set things right, even when they seem to be headed in an irretrievable downward spiral. And that's a "story" that's more than just a street name.

Story Ave is a film with strong performances throughout with a solid story. After falling in with the wrong crowd, a gifted teen named Kadir tries to rob Luis, a no-nonsense MTA conductor. To Kadir's surprise, Luis offers his friendship and shows the young man how his artistic talent could lead to a better life. The movie can be predictable in parts but it's the performances where this film really shines. The movie starts to lose it's steam about 2/3 of the way but regains it's balance and sticks the landing. There is a great message to be found here and I really wish this movie could have been marketed more so more people could enjoy it. Story Ave gets a high 8 stars out of 10 from me.

Having watched this film, I couldn't help but notice numerous missed opportunities. While the story, though unoriginal, had a pleasant vibe, the portrayal of The Bronx was captivating. Despite my appreciation for hidden gems, Story Ave fell short. With the exception of Luis Guzman, a compelling actor, the rest of the cast was mediocre at best. The portrayal of thugs seemed more like theater kids playing tough rather than authentic Bronx street individuals. Emotional connections within the story felt disjointed, and the cinematography, marked by some unengaging shots, gave off an experimental student film vibe. Regrettably, Story Ave comes across as a short film stretched into a feature length.