EVANGELIN BETHEL

Comments by EVANGELIN BETHEL

To improve, try to put some emotion in the way you convey your words

2018-01-25T01:27:57Z

I like how you spoke clearly and enunciated each word

2018-01-25T01:25:42Z

I like how your voice sounded stern at the end, it helped contribute to the tone

2018-01-25T01:07:10Z

To improve, try pausing/emphasizing some words to drive a point home

2018-01-25T01:02:11Z

Try slowing down a bit so you can enunciate each word

2018-01-25T00:53:18Z

I like the rhythm you chose to speak with, it definitely suits the poem.

2018-01-25T00:50:03Z

The pauses you did were perfect for these lines, it helped create a vivid image in our minds

2018-01-25T00:38:08Z

Try putting some emotion in your voice-it'll help convey the mood of the poem

2018-01-25T00:24:38Z

Try changing the tone in your voice to create more depth

2018-01-25T00:16:07Z

I liked the way you faded out when you said, "wind, fire. . ." etc. it helped contribute to the tone

2018-01-25T00:08:57Z