wayneo-1
Dwayne Smith
Lees Summit Missouri
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Hello Hiliton I really like your song the drums that you put to this are great and the melody is wonderful my head is bounceing with this song and the ending was cool great job and I must say again I love this keeep it up there is so much to say about this but the song speaks for it self
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Hello Christopher I love the melody in the final version and how it all falls together with the other sounds that are in the song. the bass line is smooth and the melody in the last 8 bars are great for the ending on the song. keep up the good work and stay focus.
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Hello Raymond I really like you melody in this song it has a nice feel to and flow well with the other sound in the song. The lead melody is memorable and the melody in bar 41 can have a little kick to it but over all great job keep it up
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Hello Christopher I like the melody that you put in this song it could of blend more with the song if it was not louder then the other sounds. you can turn up the paino more and the bass so you can feel all three sound in the song but over all it's a nice song you did not give us question to answer but good job.
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Hello: Heliton I really like your melody in the song I dont think that you need to change it to much it has a nice flow to it good job. As of the bass line it nice and flow good with the melody so that part is good I do think that the last 8 Bars the melody could be a little more playful but over all good job.
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Hello Andrew I really love your composition I can hear the story that your melody is telling and I love it. The bass line is great and the other instruments are nice as well the ending of the song was great. The song has a nice good feel to it keep up the work.
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Hello Duaine I really like how you changed the melody a little to make it more alive good job. and the bass line is nice and the ending of the song sound nice all together this was a good composition keep up the work.
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Hello Van I really like your composition the melody was great I like how it change from low to fast then back to slow the speeds back you that was nice. I think that the bass line could of been a little stronger and louder.it was a great but you could of ended the song different. Good job keep up the work