The Mysterious Thief Forget Me Not

this MIGHTT just be kaito kid

Haven't played it, but the artstyle and characters really remind me of Rhythm Theif, and that game is cool as hell.

i played the demo, but i really liked how i could find myself immersed in these worlds you created . it also reminds me a little bit of Kaito Kid !! anyway this is peak thank you for making my yuri fantasy real

It really reminds me of Kaito Kid..

This demo is great fun! Some of your music choices and things like the searchlight intro definitely summon up the spirit of Conan / Lupin / Saint Tail / Cat's Eye &c. Having time to spend clicking around and working out a solution fits the premise very well. I think the only thing that threw me was something very minor: the pillar box outside Ramona's (postbox, mailbox) was surprisingly short; those things are normally shoulder-height. But that's hardly a problem, and actually I thought it was kind of cute.

Good luck working on the rest of the game! I'll keep an eye out for it coming out.

I just finished playing and!! This was very cute and fun!! I especially enjoyed the section in the demo where you need to deduce who (insert spoiler here). Compared to Locked Room on Rails, I will say that the art and general game direction have improved quite a ton!! I can tell how much effort you put into each background piece, and that effort just made the game more engaging. Although there is a setup for multiple characters and their relationships with Desirée, I found my attention the most engaged when she was interacting with Irina. I really like the Detective too, as well as Maximillian (his interactions with the Detective add some fun comedic value since it's satisfying to see him get shut up).

I think my only major criticism I have (it floated in my head a lot while I was playing) was that some scenes felt like they were missing music? It could definitely just be a stylistic choice, but one example that comes to mind is when Desirée first bumps into Irina. Her introduction on stage was very nice with the accompanying music of the ballet, and the glamorous visual of her up close, so I thought Desirée actually meeting her face-to-face would carry that same sort of wonder and enchantment! However, the lack of music just made it feel awkward and not really anything else. The times there were music, I loved it!! I wanted to hear more, especially for such an important character (I assume). I'd love if Irina had a theme that accompanied her to contrast with Forget Me Not's upbeat, jazzy, playful melodies.

Overall, this is an effective (and very endearing) demo!!! I can't wait to see more from you!!