Let's be honest, the fact that Mert and Artyom fall for Finn in one look when he sees himself as a ball and chain with no self-confidence was pretty miraculous. It was just too good to be true.
Yet I honestly thought they were being sincere, that the script was just purely about sex and that we shouldn't question it.
So yeah, really liked that twist. It gives a much more complex side to the two dogs. I'd be curious to know how they knew Finn was the possessor of the artefact before Finn even realised.
Obviously, their betrayal hurts but strangely, I feel even more hurt by Apple. Unlike the other two, Apple is sincere in the desire he shared with Finn. I've just realised that it was he who prevented Maria from explaining to us that Mert and Arytom were playing a role.
Apple considers Finn to be the chosen one and doesn't bother to give him the slightest warning. OK, Apple needed them for the sake of his oh-so-important mission, but I think that's a pretty big betrayal on his part. He could have just told him not to get too attached to them so quickly.
Still, from Finn's point of view, I clearly prefer him to the other two. At least he's not a total hypocrite and his intentions seem more laudable than those of the two dogs.
In brief, I won't forget the magical moment spent on the zip line with Khaled. A body like that didn't deserve such a tragic end! What sadness! His spirit seemed to be able to be repaired, too!
Also, probably an unpopular opinion but I love Riley. After all, if there's one person you can trust after this update, it's her. She's brilliant!
I have a question about Arytom's ethics. He says he only kills people who disturb the law and order. Yet it was he who asked Holger to look after the lifeguard who hadn't asked for anything. So is the lifeguard dead or just knocked out?
I'm also a bit curious to know whether Hunter is really dead or not.
In any case, it's pretty daring to have a good proportion of the guys in the game be either assholes or psychopaths in a gay game.
Very curious how Finn will act now that he knows the truth. Sounds promising.
Hi! I'm sorry, because of some things that happened to me, I fell a bit behind, but I’m working on it now. You can check out the sneak peeks I’ve posted on Bluesky!
Is there any possibility that the protagonist could fall in love with Holger? This great white shark is so gentle, I've already fallen deeply in love with him!!!!
I got traumatized from the start because of the dream finn had😭 the moment the tiger species and also the ring that makes me remember my dream I am really crying TwT
I stumbled upon your game by accident in the "related game" because I'm curious. But I'm not disappointed. All the guys are so hot and I'm invested in both the art and story.
Why do I feel like the real Romance Routes are not them? Because if this theory is true, I wouldn't have it any other way, this is very novel and fresh concept to do hahahaha
I just read the newest build, finally - and I must say it's incredible.
Although this build, (0.7) - definitely lead to more questions than answers - and all of it sure is a tough pill to swallow, I think this is an awesome story and I can't wait for future builds!
I wanna cry, but that just tells me I'm into the story. Honestly, at this point want to see certain people suffer. I'm feeling vengeful after this update. I enjoy is my words seem confusing, it was good, strong emotions mean I was immersed in the story.
Will this turn into one of those “regretful husband desperately chasing his wife” arcs? Ahhh, I really love those two dogs, even though they betrayed me.
Even though it’s really hard for me to accept, the story itself is honestly amazing. Please don’t change your original outline and structure just because of some readers’ opinions. It’s really great — it has enough ups and downs and plot twists, and I love it so much.
But PLZ, please add a bit more of the protagonist actually taking the lead, whether he’s the bottom or the top, PLZ!
This is so painful— the story is amazing, but it hurts too much!
Thank goodness I left a romance behind in Berno, or I’d really end up all alone, sob sob…
Plz, give me an ending where I’m in control and ruling the world. I promise I’ll train these two bad dogs into good doggies.
(When I was literally leading the two of them around on leashes in the bar, I was so excited.)
What really makes this so painful for me is that the protagonist is written way too mediocre — so ordinary that there’s nothing outstanding about him at all, and he’s even overly kind… I can’t even see any chance of a good ending later on. It honestly hurts so much, especially for someone like me who gets immersed so easily. He clearly has such powerful abilities, but doesn’t know how to use them and has no say in anything. For all I know, that so-called divine artifact might even be tricking him… Please, give me a dark route where he turns evil and takes over the world, PLZ.
Hi! It’s a bit hard to explain, but try to choose only one character for each choice. There are also two points where you need to make the right decisions, one is choosing the correct movie, which unlocks a romantic scene, and the other is picking a good outfit that attracts the character you’re interested in.
Then new areas will unlock on the island that you’ll need to visit.
If you want a more detailed guide, you can check Discord. Good luck!
Man, I really hope Berno or Renzo doesn't have any ulterior motives with Finn or the Artifact. They're the only genuine character so far (also Ali I think but he's straight so there's that [maybe]) to be a potential love interest for Finn. I still do hope for the best for the twoₕₒₑ dogs we met, I just hope Finn won't make the same stupid mistake again by falling to them once more.
fantastic read! love the parts with the game/puzzle elements, i thought that was super unique. checked out your socials and im excited to see that you're working on an rpg type of game! will definitely be on the lookout for this project's completion and the next
My dear Finn, go see Berno, he's the best. Truthfully, ever since I started the game, I suspected those two were with Finn for something else. Falling in love with someone in a single day is literally impossible. Finn's sister has a good nose for these things, and what's more, in this crazy plot twist, they're cheating on him and secretly in love! Dear Finn, life isn't a fairy tale. Complete your mission and go back to a normal life. All that glitters is not gold. I hope you get your happy ending.
I did not have very high expectations of this game due to it's art style. but I'm very glad that the Rotties piqued my interest because the story this game tells is perfect.
I have never experienced such an intense emotional destress from a piece of fiction in a while and this one broke me. I needed three days just to feel somewhat normal again. I will admit that it's because I really invested myself in the story and felt like everything that was happening to Finn was happening to me, but even still the story is done very well.
Despite my strong and positive feelings, the Japan-inspired and Jiro section was a drag. It might just be personal preference [I do not like anime and weeaboos], but it felt like a very strong disconnect from the structure that was being upheld in the previous sections and the sections afterward.
Even with that, the ending I got was vicious. I'm not giving spoilers, but it fucked me up. I stared at the title screen for some time before I got up from my desk and laid down on my bed for a few hours.
I don't care what happens afterward; Rajiv is my new husband.
While the artwork is not really my cup of tea, I honestly love all the things this game had to offer. The most things I found pleasing is the dynamic that it had, it was quite charming, quirky, and although it had a quite simplistic presentation; it was oddly complex as well. I also love the many interactivity that it had, from the mini games and puzzles, and presentation of choice and decisions is perfect... I really love what you do in here.
BUT... and this is a quiet BIG 'BUT'.... what is happening on the day of we visit Jiro!? What's up with that intense and really and I MEAN really intense and uncomfortable Conflict. It really left a really bad taste in my mouth, I don't like the whole conflict that you implemented in there, specially with how easily everything resolved at the end; considering the intensity of the conflict at hand. Also the way that the conflict seems to just disappear, and everything just turn fine, felt really... REALLY WRONG.
[Spoiler]
to go in detail I don't like the whole play with Jiro (which is a kind of father figure to Mert) is blatantly Sexually as*aulting his supposed Son and his friends, and then to have the conflict to just settle with a simple sorry... Like I said before just felt really wrong. Because this topic isn't something to just be taken lightly.
Now, this one thing doesn't really make me hate the whole game, but I gotta say... I don't like how uncomfortable that part is. I think there's a better conflict to be played at here, a conflict that way more appropriate with the dynamic that you're trying to have. A topic that less intense, like maybe it's better to play the focus of the conflict with Jiro strictness, rather than his "Sexual urge". I get that you want to make a game with sensuality, but this isn't something to be taken lightly for a "Just Because"... I do love this game, and I want it to be succeed. So yeah, I'm sorry if I sounded harsh, but it's just something that needed to be addressed. I do wish the best for your project, and keep up the good work.
Hi, thank you for your comment. There’s been a lot of discussion about this, and I totally understand if it gave you a bad feeling. In that part, I wanted it to feel a bit more like an anime, so I tried to use a trope that’s seen quite often. Maybe I went a bit overboard with it, and I’m really sorry about that. Don’t worry though, this kind of issue won’t come up again later.
Oh, if that the case then I can see what you're trying to do... But if this was supposed to be comedic, I think the issue here happened because everything from the start of the game is pretty much always been straight up serious — I mean you even introduce a lot of interesting dynamic and interaction at the start, so the intention of being comedic in this part kinda got washed away. Not to mention that everything kinda went to far, that even if it was comedic since the start, the play is kinda got way too intense, it wouldn't be great if the wrong person got faced by this part...
Thank you for listening to me btw, I hope what I said didn't discouraged you or make you feel any unnecessary feeling... I wish you could get even more better in the future, and yeah — as always, keep up the good work.
After playing this version, because I have been telling the story from the perspective of finn, I will feel some frustration and feel sorry for finn when I know that neither of these two men is in love with finn. I also hope finn can attract these two men, at first because of the task, and then bring them a surprise... … Although that's not the case. I hope you can see two men who can like our finn later. If you see the author, I hope you can quietly hint whether our finn can still have a loving relationship with these two men
If I could see the author update in October, I would be extremely happy. Of course, it can be foreseen that the eighth chapter won't be available until November or December. I still really want to see the upcoming updates. However, I do hope that the endings of the two characters won't be too tragic; otherwise, it would seem like a "backstabbing" act that's just for fun.
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I really liked the plot twist.
Let's be honest, the fact that Mert and Artyom fall for Finn in one look when he sees himself as a ball and chain with no self-confidence was pretty miraculous. It was just too good to be true.
Yet I honestly thought they were being sincere, that the script was just purely about sex and that we shouldn't question it.
So yeah, really liked that twist. It gives a much more complex side to the two dogs. I'd be curious to know how they knew Finn was the possessor of the artefact before Finn even realised.
Obviously, their betrayal hurts but strangely, I feel even more hurt by Apple. Unlike the other two, Apple is sincere in the desire he shared with Finn. I've just realised that it was he who prevented Maria from explaining to us that Mert and Arytom were playing a role.
Apple considers Finn to be the chosen one and doesn't bother to give him the slightest warning. OK, Apple needed them for the sake of his oh-so-important mission, but I think that's a pretty big betrayal on his part. He could have just told him not to get too attached to them so quickly.
Still, from Finn's point of view, I clearly prefer him to the other two. At least he's not a total hypocrite and his intentions seem more laudable than those of the two dogs.
In brief, I won't forget the magical moment spent on the zip line with Khaled. A body like that didn't deserve such a tragic end! What sadness! His spirit seemed to be able to be repaired, too!
Also, probably an unpopular opinion but I love Riley. After all, if there's one person you can trust after this update, it's her. She's brilliant!
I have a question about Arytom's ethics. He says he only kills people who disturb the law and order. Yet it was he who asked Holger to look after the lifeguard who hadn't asked for anything. So is the lifeguard dead or just knocked out?
I'm also a bit curious to know whether Hunter is really dead or not.
In any case, it's pretty daring to have a good proportion of the guys in the game be either assholes or psychopaths in a gay game.
Very curious how Finn will act now that he knows the truth. Sounds promising.
loved that last update, I kinda do wish there was a Rottweiler brothers route, they were hot.
Update?
Hi! I'm sorry, because of some things that happened to me, I fell a bit behind, but I’m working on it now. You can check out the sneak peeks I’ve posted on Bluesky!
Is there any possibility that the protagonist could fall in love with Holger? This great white shark is so gentle, I've already fallen deeply in love with him!!!!
Holger has an route i think. If you pick the right answers you get an cg at some part of the game
I got traumatized from the start because of the dream finn had😭 the moment the tiger species and also the ring that makes me remember my dream I am really crying TwT
I stumbled upon your game by accident in the "related game" because I'm curious. But I'm not disappointed. All the guys are so hot and I'm invested in both the art and story.
没事后面要伤心了
How (soon) is the update?🤧
Hi, about one week or more. This update is twice as big as the previous updates, so I need to spend more time working on it.
I’m doing my best, and I hope you can wait a little longer!
Please sir i want some more...
I wish there was a way to get closer to Albert and the dog family they are all so sexy
Need update😢
Soon!
希望王子狗真心对主角的，不然真的太惨了
Why do I feel like the real Romance Routes are not them? Because if this theory is true, I wouldn't have it any other way, this is very novel and fresh concept to do hahahaha
Bruhhh hahahahahaha
This was genuinely so painful to watch, I kept asking why this is so well made and yet............so upsetting and eye-roll to read
UNTIL the reveal hahahaha then I thought "OH THAT'S WHY IT'S SO UNBEARABLE 😂😂😂" Then everything clicked in place hahahahaha
This VN is the definition of "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back"
8/10 would definitely wait for the rest of the update
Deveriam aproveitar o Renzo também
I just read the newest build, finally - and I must say it's incredible.
Although this build, (0.7) - definitely lead to more questions than answers - and all of it sure is a tough pill to swallow, I think this is an awesome story and I can't wait for future builds!
I wanna cry, but that just tells me I'm into the story. Honestly, at this point want to see certain people suffer. I'm feeling vengeful after this update. I enjoy is my words seem confusing, it was good, strong emotions mean I was immersed in the story.
Will this turn into one of those “regretful husband desperately chasing his wife” arcs? Ahhh, I really love those two dogs, even though they betrayed me.
Even though it’s really hard for me to accept, the story itself is honestly amazing. Please don’t change your original outline and structure just because of some readers’ opinions. It’s really great — it has enough ups and downs and plot twists, and I love it so much.
But PLZ, please add a bit more of the protagonist actually taking the lead, whether he’s the bottom or the top, PLZ!
This is so painful— the story is amazing, but it hurts too much! Thank goodness I left a romance behind in Berno, or I’d really end up all alone, sob sob…
Plz, give me an ending where I’m in control and ruling the world. I promise I’ll train these two bad dogs into good doggies. (When I was literally leading the two of them around on leashes in the bar, I was so excited.)
Please forgive me for freaking out like a lunatic in the comments on your page, it’s just that I’m really, really in so much pain right now.
How do i get these 2 scenes im missing?
Same cant seem to get these 2
Hi! It’s a bit hard to explain, but try to choose only one character for each choice. There are also two points where you need to make the right decisions, one is choosing the correct movie, which unlocks a romantic scene, and the other is picking a good outfit that attracts the character you’re interested in.
Then new areas will unlock on the island that you’ll need to visit.
If you want a more detailed guide, you can check Discord. Good luck!
Man, I really hope Berno or Renzo doesn't have any ulterior motives with Finn or the Artifact. They're the only genuine character so far (also Ali I think but he's straight so there's that [maybe]) to be a potential love interest for Finn. I still do hope for the best for the twoₕₒₑ dogs we met, I just hope Finn won't make the same stupid mistake again by falling to them once more.
fantastic read! love the parts with the game/puzzle elements, i thought that was super unique. checked out your socials and im excited to see that you're working on an rpg type of game! will definitely be on the lookout for this project's completion and the next
Love the game! Looking forward to more.
Anyway to update the discord link? It says invalid or expired invite.
I checked and the link works, but if you still have trouble, massage me on Discord: polar.cakee
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Click on discord icon in the page.
Je veux la suite dès que possible 😎
My dear Finn, go see Berno, he's the best. Truthfully, ever since I started the game, I suspected those two were with Finn for something else. Falling in love with someone in a single day is literally impossible. Finn's sister has a good nose for these things, and what's more, in this crazy plot twist, they're cheating on him and secretly in love! Dear Finn, life isn't a fairy tale. Complete your mission and go back to a normal life. All that glitters is not gold. I hope you get your happy ending.
So only Berno's the best boi
I hoping wolfman Finn ran over comes back as a savior
There's Mert's dad too, besides the pervy horniness of the old man, he at least seemed genuinally interested on Finn :V
sigh finn deserve better LIKE BERNO
Is there a guide out there for getting all the scenes unlocked in the gallery? Still missing some after a few tries . . .
I did not have very high expectations of this game due to it's art style. but I'm very glad that the Rotties piqued my interest because the story this game tells is perfect.
I have never experienced such an intense emotional destress from a piece of fiction in a while and this one broke me. I needed three days just to feel somewhat normal again. I will admit that it's because I really invested myself in the story and felt like everything that was happening to Finn was happening to me, but even still the story is done very well.
Despite my strong and positive feelings, the Japan-inspired and Jiro section was a drag. It might just be personal preference [I do not like anime and weeaboos], but it felt like a very strong disconnect from the structure that was being upheld in the previous sections and the sections afterward.
Even with that, the ending I got was vicious. I'm not giving spoilers, but it fucked me up. I stared at the title screen for some time before I got up from my desk and laid down on my bed for a few hours.
I don't care what happens afterward; Rajiv is my new husband.
While the artwork is not really my cup of tea, I honestly love all the things this game had to offer. The most things I found pleasing is the dynamic that it had, it was quite charming, quirky, and although it had a quite simplistic presentation; it was oddly complex as well. I also love the many interactivity that it had, from the mini games and puzzles, and presentation of choice and decisions is perfect... I really love what you do in here.
BUT... and this is a quiet BIG 'BUT'.... what is happening on the day of we visit Jiro!? What's up with that intense and really and I MEAN really intense and uncomfortable Conflict. It really left a really bad taste in my mouth, I don't like the whole conflict that you implemented in there, specially with how easily everything resolved at the end; considering the intensity of the conflict at hand. Also the way that the conflict seems to just disappear, and everything just turn fine, felt really... REALLY WRONG.
[Spoiler]
to go in detail I don't like the whole play with Jiro (which is a kind of father figure to Mert) is blatantly Sexually as*aulting his supposed Son and his friends, and then to have the conflict to just settle with a simple sorry... Like I said before just felt really wrong. Because this topic isn't something to just be taken lightly.
Now, this one thing doesn't really make me hate the whole game, but I gotta say... I don't like how uncomfortable that part is. I think there's a better conflict to be played at here, a conflict that way more appropriate with the dynamic that you're trying to have. A topic that less intense, like maybe it's better to play the focus of the conflict with Jiro strictness, rather than his "Sexual urge". I get that you want to make a game with sensuality, but this isn't something to be taken lightly for a "Just Because"... I do love this game, and I want it to be succeed. So yeah, I'm sorry if I sounded harsh, but it's just something that needed to be addressed. I do wish the best for your project, and keep up the good work.
Hi, thank you for your comment. There’s been a lot of discussion about this, and I totally understand if it gave you a bad feeling. In that part, I wanted it to feel a bit more like an anime, so I tried to use a trope that’s seen quite often. Maybe I went a bit overboard with it, and I’m really sorry about that. Don’t worry though, this kind of issue won’t come up again later.
Oh, if that the case then I can see what you're trying to do... But if this was supposed to be comedic, I think the issue here happened because everything from the start of the game is pretty much always been straight up serious — I mean you even introduce a lot of interesting dynamic and interaction at the start, so the intention of being comedic in this part kinda got washed away. Not to mention that everything kinda went to far, that even if it was comedic since the start, the play is kinda got way too intense, it wouldn't be great if the wrong person got faced by this part...
Thank you for listening to me btw, I hope what I said didn't discouraged you or make you feel any unnecessary feeling... I wish you could get even more better in the future, and yeah — as always, keep up the good work.
I'm going with Rajiv all the way!
- I hope this comment won't age like milk.
After playing this version, because I have been telling the story from the perspective of finn, I will feel some frustration and feel sorry for finn when I know that neither of these two men is in love with finn. I also hope finn can attract these two men, at first because of the task, and then bring them a surprise... … Although that's not the case. I hope you can see two men who can like our finn later. If you see the author, I hope you can quietly hint whether our finn can still have a loving relationship with these two men
Dios me quedé con ganas de ver lo que pasará en el futuro es tan emocionante apoyaré al creador por esto la verdad esta novela me encantó
If I could see the author update in October, I would be extremely happy. Of course, it can be foreseen that the eighth chapter won't be available until November or December. I still really want to see the upcoming updates. However, I do hope that the endings of the two characters won't be too tragic; otherwise, it would seem like a "backstabbing" act that's just for fun.
I love this VN