Arch Doc: 16 July 2003 Editor's Draft

• From: Ian B. Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
• Date: 16 Jul 2003 17:37:54 -0700
• To: www-tag@w3.org
• Message-Id: <1058402273.903.491.camel@seabright>

Hello,

The 16 July 2003 Editor's Draft of "Architecture of
the World Wide Web" [1] is now available. I made a few
editorial changes to yesterday's draft based on some
input from TAG participants. I do not expect to produce
another draft before the face-to-face meeting next
week.

The primary changes [2] in this draft (see also diff [3]) 
were:

      * 2: Editorial change to first sentence of paragraph based on
        comments from Stuart Williams.
      * 2.4.1: changed "URI makes sense" to "client can do something
        useful with frag id."
      * 2.5: Based on comments from Stuart Williams, changed "operations
        are defined by" to "available operations depend on."
      * 2.5.2: Based on comments from David Orchard, inserted an
        Editor's Note about "on the Web"

 - Ian

[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2003/webarch-20030716
[2] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/webarch/changes
[3] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2003/diff-webarch-20030716.html
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Ian Jacobs (ij@w3.org)   http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs
Tel:                     +1 718 260-9447

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