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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme: how well would the module have fit into the Appendix N? | #159 | 3.652 | 3.923 |
| Art: how well does the art support the other content? | #173 | 2.936 | 3.154 |
| Playability: how easy would it be to run this module? | #185 | 2.793 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #193 | 2.979 | 3.200 |
| Layout: how easy is it to find all the presented information? | #200 | 2.650 | 2.846 |
| Writing: how clear and/or interesting is the writing? | #203 | 2.864 | 3.077 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I can see me using this as is for one of my groups. It is internally consistent with flexible starting conditions thanks to your tables.
Four things: 1 Where are the toilets? They are described on bottom of page 3, IIRC. 2 Are toilets also at the two symbols in the secret room on level 1? 3 I like your use of coloured dots to show NPC locations. In the future, consider augmenting those with other shapes (e.g, square, triangle) so color-blind users also discern the differences. 4. The description of the body dumping site on level 3 uses “below” when I think you mean “above,” though perhaps I am confused by the elevation or orientation of the levels.
Thanks again for the excellent dungeon. I can’t wait to see if my players will smear their blades with peanut butter!
Thank you for such great feedback! I think I'll go back and make another version that's a bit longer with an easier to read layout with toilet markers! and I'll definitely be taking this feedback into account.
I'm glad you like it!
And yes you're absolutely right, I did mean above instead of below, that's 100% my bad, I'll fix it up as soon as I can.
I appreciate the silly touches.
An adventure with the words "heterochronic parabiosis" is automatically a nice adventure, it´s included in the rules
Thank you! I'm very glad you think so too!
The horror of a ritual creating a sinister creature made from the flesh of several people clashed with the peanut twist. And the final options are quite interesting.
You had me at cultists. I stayed for the peanut allergy. Nice one.
Thanks for checking it out, I'm really glad you liked it enough to stay!