oh my GOD this was probably the best demo ive ever seen of anything in my entire life and im literally so hype for the rest to come out. 

MY OBSERVATIONS AND THOUGHTS !!
it honestly took me a few hours to even get to chapter one, i was talking with my friends for most of it and even then there were so many cool options and dialogue that tommy and his peers could share, i was like enamored with all of it. this was seriously so cool, the conversation between everybody just came so natural and its like theyre really people and theyre there yknow?
OH MY GOD AND DONT EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THE MUSIC THAT SHIT ACTUALLY FUCKS !!!!! at the beginning screen i was like "oh cool theres background music" and then when the game finally started and that cool title screen music came on i just felt something awaken in me, and i deaduzz felt this every time i heard that "zorlok" title music its actually so cool. kudos to whoever made that, it was so awesome... the actual background music was also very nice, not overwhelming, honestly really nice to have while i was chatting away with my friends
most interactive games like this will let you choose what your mc looks like n allat but duuduue dued dued dude dude this one was just different. DONT ASK ME HOW, IT WAS JUST DIFFERENT it was so soo cool and awesome and really better then anything else ive seen idk how to describe it you just did such a cool awesome job bro
maybe my memory is serving me wrong but so far i havent seen any intro to an IF game like this start the way this has. usually we start as, well.. us, and we get to choose what we look like n allat but i liked the idea of us starting as tommy and learning this this and that about him and just UFH this is so cool bro your absolutely wonderful. i feel like im glazing but dude finishing this at 6am  was such an experience and i must express it to YOU, dear developer
i promise this is the last thing. the game takes place in washington but im pretty sure your british, or atleast not from america. im not from washington either but idk anybody in the US who calls their pants "trousers" or says "bloody hell". this isnt criticism, i just thought it was kinda silly how i noticed all those little things and u probably didnt even realize u wrote it in

ok bro, im totally done for now.. im so sorry i wrote so much, i usually try keepong it to a few observations ive had but i absolutely had to spill every single thought i had at you. im certain i'll do this again once the game updates. you MUST know how awesome this is. i really hope u keep it up.. keep it saucy bro

if zorlok has million fans, I'm one of them

if zorlok has one fan, its me 

if zorlok has no fans, im dead

no words can describe how much i love love love love this

Mannn that was fun as hell! I really do sympathize with Zorlok because imagine waking up with no memory of yourself and seeing bits and pieces of who you used to be. I had a lot of options to be rude to Tommy, which is fair, but then I remembered this is a kid who's like 15 years old, of course he didn't think that far and this is also his first time experiencing magic. Naturally he'd be mistaken or didn't understand the severity. So I'm glad there were at least some where we could be civil with Tommy.

Also, he's such a nice kid who's genuinely trying to help and correct his very severe mistakes. I'm not sure if it was because of my choices but I really did enjoy communicating with Tommy, I sure hope we can communicate with our Hellhound soon because man I want to re-experience that bond again.

Aaa I'm so looking forward to whatever the hell is going to happen next! Looking forward to all of them and once again, amazing job!!

lol I made myself Adam Sandler but Tommy still called me biblical because of the other Adam

this was actually the best thing i ever played, i cant stop thinking about it. i think im in love 

Ok but first off the game is great, I loved it, I love the interactions between tommy and our demon (or well maybe the ones I choose) and the amount of customization you can do to it, but I have a question...were you prepared for somebody to name the demon Ares? Honestly if I was you I would also expect it who wouldn't name a demon Ares is like the best name out there for one (In retrospect I think I made the most stereotypical demon-looking guy but give me faith)

My hell hound: GREG

This game is really really awesome so far! I'm impressed at the sheer amount of effort put into just the first part of the IF. The coding, the customization options, the aesthetics, awesome!! I'm at the Miss Stella shop part. Though I noticed when I tried to save it gave me an error, though I figured that wasn't too bad. Until I tried to save to disk and realized that was also giving me an error! The autosave kind of lags behind, and I like my freedom with my save points, so hopefully this can be fixed soon! Unless the error's on my end I suppose?

Here's the error. It appears to be the same one for both the save button and the save to disk button.

Loved the update! Super excited for more!

I like Tommy but I literally want to strangle him after he made me into Zorlok because right now my character is like a hissy, sopping wet cat in the rain. Great writing!

Holy crap, okay, this was such a fucking ride and I love it. I named my demon's alias 'Magdalene' thinking nothing of it, and Tommy actually pointed it out! I was not expecting that! Makes me wonder what other names I can put that gets different responses.

You've really thought of everything, author, bless

The writing is good and the music adds to the atmosphere, but up to the point I read you have more control over Tommy than Zorlok. Even though the synopsis makes it clear that you are supposed to play as Zorlok.

To be honest it feels like Tommy is supposed to be the main POV character.

Edit: What I wrote above only applies to the prologue ^_^

At the start of Episode 1 you are in Zorlok's POV and I also would not change it because the way the reveal is written is really cool.