My Cake Fell
This is just a lot of sappy silliness. When will I ever learn?
The male lead is sexy and sweet with a big secret. She acts like a silly schoolgirl. Coy might be the word here but there is nothing alluring about her behavior. What is she afraid of? Growing up maybe.
The plot is solid and makes for good romantic conflict to push the story forward. There has to be a reason for girl to hate boy and this one comes through, dumb as it is. The acting and directing are ok but the writing could use some help.
Production values are good. Sound, lighting, etc.
The male lead is sexy and sweet with a big secret. She acts like a silly schoolgirl. Coy might be the word here but there is nothing alluring about her behavior. What is she afraid of? Growing up maybe.
The plot is solid and makes for good romantic conflict to push the story forward. There has to be a reason for girl to hate boy and this one comes through, dumb as it is. The acting and directing are ok but the writing could use some help.
Production values are good. Sound, lighting, etc.
- tommy5677
- Jan 10, 2022