Yelling!
Fan of the show, but WTF was that episode?
Everyone is yelling at someone for little or no reason. If that's all relevant to the show then there's too much going on. But, but it really seems pointless.
I'll suggest a maximum of two conflicts in an episode, preferably a primary & secondary.
All these squabbles don't make for a coherent story line.
Everyone is yelling at someone for little or no reason. If that's all relevant to the show then there's too much going on. But, but it really seems pointless.
I'll suggest a maximum of two conflicts in an episode, preferably a primary & secondary.
All these squabbles don't make for a coherent story line.
- j238
- Oct 9, 2021