Pepe's first cartoon was great but for the ending.
ODOR-ABLE KITTY is Pepe's first short, and he does well but for the ending. I like this cartoon but for that.
The animation is rather strange, but besides Pepe it looks fine. 8/10
The story is good, a nice change from the white stripe routine, though that's still good. But the ending leaves much to be desired. 7/10
The lines are good, but there's still room for improvement in this department. 8/10
The visual jokes are, of course, minimal, except for the beginning and the end. 6.5/10
Overall, this cartoon is a good effort, and from me it recieves an average of 72.5% and a solid B+.
The animation is rather strange, but besides Pepe it looks fine. 8/10
The story is good, a nice change from the white stripe routine, though that's still good. But the ending leaves much to be desired. 7/10
The lines are good, but there's still room for improvement in this department. 8/10
The visual jokes are, of course, minimal, except for the beginning and the end. 6.5/10
Overall, this cartoon is a good effort, and from me it recieves an average of 72.5% and a solid B+.
- rapt0r_claw-1
- Dec 21, 2003