Make Up

Newb filmmaker Claire Oakley did a fine job at directing, but the writing was paced slower than a snail's pace. The 86 min runtime felt like an eternity, and there were far too many unnecessary random few-second shots. It made matters worse that lead Molly Windsor's role was drab and depressing. It's a good metaphorical story, but should've been a short film instead, which is up Oakley's alley. Cinematography and score were decent. It's a 6/10 from me.

I'm so disappointed. For the first half I was so into it! The location, the vibe, the atmosphere. But then by the final part, the wheels had well and truly fell off the car. The story just completely caved in on its self. It's literally like two different movies split directly down the middle.

One is a mystery, suspense movie about finding evidence of an affair and the other is a "finding who you are" movie. But the insane thing is, the first "plot" is completely dropped and just forgotten about.

There are lots of pointless things that happen too. Like they feel like they are going to be plot points but then they just aren't?

The writing was like "cagey". No one spoke I'm full sentences. "Jade has a reputation" "what reputation?" "*silence*". Like why did no one talk properly. They just eluded to things and then never followed up on them.

Iv been super harsh on this movie but it's because I loved so many parts of it, particularly the atmosphere. Sea side locations AND caravans are totally my vibe so I was sold. And Shirley was completely insane and I needed more from her. But the the rest of the movie just tore it's self apart from the inside.

Most viewers may not like the slow pace and sparse dialogue but I thought overall it was quite effective in telling a good story. I'm a fan of Eric Roehmer. The slow everyday-pace set a tone of mystery. The young woman is trying to figure out what's going on as are we. I hope to see more from the director-writer. The lead actress is exceptional.

I found the lead character to be 2 dimensional and to have few redeeming or watchable features. She didn't do a lot, was just one of those characters that just watches everything. This is an overdone technical device to encourage the viewer to watch and pay more attention. However, there was little to see, causing frustration.

The other characters had more life in them but these were not exploited to their full potential. The central theme being a mystery character, didn't really come off that well. This again could have been developed and made much more dramatic and interesting.

A good effort but this storyline was just the basic framework of the story, more flesh was needed on the empty and rather slow bones of the piece.

I enjoyed watching this. It did not easily fit into any genre, and was all the better for that. A rather episodic film, with no clear linear narrative, but it still retained my interest throughout.

It really captured the bleak, barreness of an out of season caravan park, with its motley collection of residents with nowhere else to go.

A bit overloaded with symbolism at times, but definitely worth watching in my view.