Torn

It feels like this was supposed to be a feature length film, but due to budget issues, it was cut short. The story seem rushed. There was no time for character development, therefore, I was not able to connect with Deekin. Was the girl in the first scene Deekin's girlfriend? Amanda didn't pay anyone for editing, or for background score/music either; so editing seem lose and score irrelevant. Bryan Lyons isn't a dancer either, which was a major theme of the video.