The Flying Man

I hope it gets green-lit for development, then I hope they follow the vision through to a truly thought-provoking product with a mind-jarring denouement.

I've seen other feints in this direction: Dorman Grammit's superman fantasies in Frank Stack's "Dr. Feelgood" comics; and The Battlin' American in a Lloyd Llewelyn comic by Dan Clowes. And, of course, Watchmen.

For every 1000 pop culture theorists who can deconstruct the superhero genre at the drop of a hat, there may only be one who can write a scenario and screenplay that teases something truly exciting and accessible therefrom.

And it does need doing; the symbol is rife with implications, up to and including coercive fiat as the trump card of superpower nations.

A simple story, good special effects, the idea of justice and, after Marvel universe, a not so strange character looking for do what it must be done. A good short film, with a powerfull end, with nice science to build the tension and dialogue. Short, good start for a new serie.

How could u have left us in such a big flarking cliffhangger, holy flark, dude this is incredible, the feel of the short was AWESOME, please make this into a show or a movie i need to see more of ryan and the flying man. I am at loss of words, if you guys put your soul and heart into the script if it ever becomes like a full fledged out tv show or movie, it has so much POTENTIAL, it could even be in the conversation as superman and omni man if you guys hit the right spot on it. And since the movies getting a lot more attention now, i think u guys could definitely pull it off, and dear god please do.

A new flying superhero has arrived in town however this one appears to be targeting specific people to kill them – dropping them from the sky or in front of trains etc. It soon becomes apparent that his targets are criminals which, while not morally right, makes the criminal community nervous – not least of which is Mike, a former cop driving to a gun deal.

This short film is another one that feels like a pitch to get something bigger off the ground and to be fair it is an ambitious film that aims for the crowded superhero market. This is a little different though, since the Flying Man of the title is a vigilant who has decided to kill those who break the law. We open with a news footage montage of this happening with commentary over it – this gives the film an edge of realism but also buys the effects some love since the "grabbed footage" means more distant and less clarity. From here we step into the car with Mike and Rob and now the action is dialogue driven with only the wait for the flying man to potentially drop in. This section is not as good as it needed to be – there isn't enough added about the characters and the "wait for it" aspect is pretty much the whole deal.

Of course this aspect is still very good and is restrained in what it does. The return for the final minutes is again technically very impressive and the conclusion leaves open questions and room for more. I liked the focus on Mike rather than the flying man since this makes the short be more than just a series of effects shots, although of course it is still easy to see it as such. Worth a look for the dark edge and the nice tense air it has throughout.

I'm not sure what happens to this it says in development if so it should get picked up it could even become a tv series