Ashes

Absolutely loved the "dreamy" shots, but the dream fell short, and not because it wasn't film-worthy. You don't call something experimental because it's unusual but because there's something new being practiced. This experiment has already been done more aesthetically. Picking every 15th shot from a grainy 35mm could make you calm and give you all those words but gluing those for 20 minutes won't make a 'drama'.