Wolf in Sheep Clothes

Well, it was definitely an ... attempt. Okay, you have no access to experienced actors, it's fine. Reshoot, reshoot, reshoot! Not to mention, the understandably amateur cast can be improved with good dialogues, so it doesn't hurt to strive for authenticity instead of this "android style". Strive for authenticity in general, to make viewers believe: they see real people on the screen, or at least persons who weren't cut from a styrofoam sheet. Also, it's worth practicing camerawork before shooting, and then maybe your characters won't slip out of focus randomly. And for God's sake, don't hurry, give time for the plot to develop its atmosphere! Filmmaking 101, honestly. But I'm in a generous mood today, so here are 2 points, go buy yourself something nice!