The Mill on the Floss

Every once in a while, a reader will write to me complaining about some of my comments focusing too much on narrative structure, and ignoring the direct emotional connection with the story. This is largely the intent of my comments, to remark on how stories are told. I'm convinced that a new vocabulary for storytelling is evolving now, and its highly introspective, referencing the storytelling in the story.

Lots of commentors will talk about whether the story has juice, connection, power. I want to delve into why, and what might be part of a toolbox if you want to make powerful stories.

Hardly anything could be more fun than to do this with films of old books, especially novels that themselves were at the edge of emergence in a massive advance in storyforms. This is.

Eliot is interesting. She's after Austen, who introduced introspective irony and conflated the humor of surrounding society (in her case class structure) with human emotions. The Bronte sisters in different ways inserted raw passion into this vessel. Eliot was interested in both but was more of a technician, worrying about the design of the vessel, the conveyor of emotional impact. If she were alive today, she'd be thinking about quantum logic and rivers of time. She might be among the most powerful souls weaving the world.

But she's not; she's frozen in her time, but still a bit magical. And in this book we have all sorts of contrived devices that seem not so: legal and sibling contests, inevitability of love and river, honesty in milling selves.

So. Along comes TeeVee, that great grinder of imagination and they do what they think is merely dramatizing, a sort of adding pictures to text. As with most BBC efforts, it is massively incompetent because it misunderstands the material. Somehow it assumes that if you retain events and dialog you convey the soul of the thing. But in this case, the soul is as much in the container; the skin, the shape, the face.

There isn't the slightest nod to structure, excepting the necessity to chunk it into half hour pieces with each piece having a logical pause. One or two actors actually have some competence, and the encounters among the four sisters has good timing. But unless you simply want to tread water in the sea of imagination, stay away.

Ted's Evaluation -- 1 of 3: You can find something better to do with this part of your life.

The 1978 miniseries is over 3 hours long. The 1997 movie is 1 hour and 45 minutes long. Yet, every event in the 3 hour version is in the shorter version. The reverse, however, is not true. Five crucial events of the story are visible in the 1997 (shorter) version but are missing from the 3 hour version: (1) the first conflict between Mr. Tulliver and Mr. Wakem, in which Tulliver wins, then insults Wakem. This shows why Tulliver thinks he'll win again and is strung along by a lawyer until he has mortgaged everything. It also provides motivation for Wakem's vengeful act of buying the mill, which in the longer version is left unmotivated. We are merely told that he is fed up with Tulliver.

(2) The selling of the mill to Wakem. In the 1978 version, we are told that it happened. In the 1997 version, we see it happen.

(3) The selling of the furniture of the Tullivers. This makes their homelessness visible and visceral.

(4) The scene in which Tom pays his father's debts. In the 1978 three-hour version, we are told that it is going to happen; then we see Tulliver on the way back from the meeting. We need to see this climatic event. In the 1997 version, we do.

(5) The restoration of the deed to the mill to the Tullivers.

The picture quality is acceptable in both versions, as is the music, but are better in the 1997 version. The casting is acceptable in both versions. The acting is acceptable in both. So, why do I give 3 stars to the 1978 version and four and a half stars to the 1997 version? The screenplay. Since both screenplays tell the same story with almost the same events, this comparison provides an excellent study for those interested in screen writing.

The 1978 version appears to have been written by a stage playwright (and not a good one at that). Each scene is set. People chat for a few moments. A character enters. Whatever is going to happen in that scene happens. Characters exit. Next scene.

The 1997 version is written like a movie. We are thrust into a scene just as something is about to happen. It happens. We cut to the next scene, where we are again thrust into the moment when something is about to happen. This makes for far more effective storytelling.

Also, the nitty-gritty of the scenes is better done in the 1997 version. It isn't the acting. It is the fact that the actors have a script that will let them make the emotions effective, and they do.

If you compare either version (or any movie version) with the book, then of course you can call it Cliff Notes. That tells you nothing.

The ending is better in the 1978 version and is also faithful to the book. The beginning of the 1997 version, like the ending, is a mistake.

The other problem is that the 1997 version is only available on VHS and hard to get at that. So, get the 1978 version if you can't get the videotape or don't want to; otherwise, wait and hope that someone will have the sense to put the 1997 version on DVD.

The film crew for the BBC production of "The Mill on the Floss", 1978 was-

Director of Photography, Fred Hamilton. Sound Recordist, Les Collins. Camera operator, Roger Twyman. First Assistant Focus. Graham Banks. Camera Grip. Stan Swetman.

Location for the filming directed by Ron Wilson was the mill at Woolerton, near Wellsborne, Warwickshire. ( Five miles east of Stratford-upon Avon ). Everyone on the crew couldn't help but fall in love with the beautiful and charming young 12 years old Gorgia Slowe, who played Maggie Tulliver in the early episodes.

"The Mill on the Floss" (TV mini-series 1978) is a BBC production, directed by Ronald Wilson. This is one of George Eliot's lesser-known novels, and not considered her best work.

However, the movie is worth seeing for the fine performances of the actors in the major roles. Pippa Guard does an excellent job as Maggie Tulliver, the protagonist. Christopher Blake is equally good as Tom Tulliver, her brother.

However, to me, acting honors go to Ray Smith as their father, Mr. Tulliver. Mr. Tulliver, who owns the mill on the Floss River, is a fascinating character. He's headstrong and makes serious errors in judgment. However, he loves his wife and children, and is trying to do his best for them.

One of the most important "characters" in the novel is society. The society of the day was intolerant of women who tried to step outside the role prescribed for them. Society certainly was unforgiving about any hint of scandal. Social mores are in evidence in almost every scene in this film. At a different time and place, the story could have ended very differently.

This made-for-TV production was shown in half-hour episodes. That's annoying, because about 20% of the viewing time is dedicated to running the credits. I believe in watching the credits, but seeing them eight times was tedious.

This isn't a great film, but it's definitely worth seeing if you are a George Eliot fan, or if you plan to see Middlemarch or Daniel Deronda, which are in the same series. ( If I have a box of five George Eliot DVD's, I want to see them all.) Because it was meant for TV, Mill on the Floss works well on the small screen.

As with all George Eliot's writing Mill on the Floss is well worth the read. It is not quite complex or layered as Middlemarch and Daniel Deronda but the characterisation is still rich, the conflicts and social commentary sharply observed and the emotions high. Although it is the book from Eliot that is adapted the most(I admit that I've yet to see the other versions, have heard a lot of good things about the 1997 version), Mill on the Floss is still very difficult to adapt. This adaptation is one of the weaker ones in the collection, the weakest being Adam Bede(still quite good) and the best being Middlemarch(which is outstanding) but does a respectable job, it is long(necessary) and wisely takes its time telling the story. In that regard it doesn't always work, it can lack momentum and does drag, at the same time though because there are omissions the storytelling also can feel rushed and not always flowing as it ought to in a jumpy sense. You do miss the scene where Lucy visits Maggie after Maggie's aborted elopement, one of the book's most poignant moments. And John Moulder Brown is very annoying as Stephen, the character is a very shallow one in the first place but that and Stephen's conceit are taken to extremities here and generally you don't just get what anyone sees in him. Him aside, this adaptation is very well-acted if perhaps somewhat stagy for some.

Anton Lesser really stood out, he does wonderfully with the role and is both grotesque and affecting making it easy for us to be repulsed by him as well as pitying him. Ray Smith is nobly powerful, Lucy is appropriately vivacious and Judy Cornwell is every bit as sympathetic. Christopher Blake portrays Tom's arrogance very well and Maggie is played with spirit and delicacy. The children do competently match their adult counterparts. The characters and their relationships and conflicts(Maggie and Tom's especially, and Maggie, Mill on the Floss' central character is still very complex) are well realised, these are characters that are not black and white but ones with strengths and flaws(always a strong point with Eliot). The story does have great emotional impact, especially the ending, the romance between Maggie and Tom very touching, the rivalry between the Wakams and Tullivers having some intensity and Mr Tulliver shows genuine love for his family. While the spirit of the book is still there, if not as well-paced or as cohesive as it could have been. The script respects Eliot's style and while it takes its time to tell the story there is a certain tautness as well meaning that it doesn't feel overly padded. The music is unobtrusive, sensitive and haunting as well as sympathetic to the drama and the adaptation is well-made. It's darker and more soft-grained than the other four adaptations in the collection but just as atmospheric and evocative. The attention to detail is done in a way that is not too rich-looking or bleak and the scenery is beautiful. All in all, decent as an adaptation and on its own but falls short at the same time. 7/10 Bethany Cox