Doughboys

DOUGHBOYS (Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer, 1930), directed by Edward Sedgwick, stars that deadpan silent film comedian Buster Keaton in his second sound comedy. Not essentially a movie about those working for the Pillsbury Company, this is one about soldiers during the first World War, then commonly known as "doughboys." Though an improvement over Keaton's initial talkie, FREE AND EASY (1930) set in the Hollywood movie studio, it's far from his silent masterpieces made during his peak years of the twenties.

The plot revolves around Elmer Julius Stuyvesant Jr. (Buster Keaton), a hapless millionaire hopelessly in love with a shop-girl named Mary Rogers (Sally Eilers), whom he waits for every day holding a bouquet of flowers hoping she'd go out with him. In spite of her constant rejections, he refuses to give up hope. As he awaits once again by his limousine outside the store, a recruiting parade headed by a pretty blonde passes by, attracts the attention to Elmer's driver to abandon his post and enlist. At the advise of his manservant, Gustave (Arnold Korff), Elmer goes over to an employment agency to hire a new driver. While doing this, Elmer unwittingly enters a recruiting office where he finds himself enlisted into the Army. While in the platoon with other "dumb clucks" consisting of the ukulele playing Nescopeck (Cliff Edwards), Elmer ends up under the tough watch of Sergeant Brophy (Edward Brophy). As Elmer intends to resign, he soon encounters Mary, also in the Army now acting as hostess in the entertainment division. After some basic training and constant yelling by Brophy, the troop finally heads over to France where the outcome of the war is anything but all quiet on the western front.

With war themes as surefire material for many comedians dating back to the silent era, and future comedians as well (Abbott and Costello in Universal's BUCK PRIVATES (1941) being a classic example), DOUGHBOYS is obviously a wise choice selection for Keaton. It's been said that some comedy material used in this production was based on Keaton's own experience in the war. It must have been a funny war where Keaton is concerned. Being a straightforward comedy, there's time during its 79 minutes for some brief song interludes composed by Howard Johnson and Joseph Meyer. Though "Military Man" is heard briefly during the early portion of the story, the second in command, "Sing" (Sung by Cliff Edwards and reprized by an unidentified soldier) gets the full treatment during a canteen show that concludes with an Apache dance with Keaton in drag. On the humorous side, many of the comedy routines are carefully planned out and don't extend themselves to boredom. One, in particular, where Keaton's Elmer is forced to go through a physical, ends abruptly. Considering how amusing that scene was, it makes one wish for its continuance to what's to take occur afterwards. Another amusing bit, clipped into the well documented, "So Funny It Hurt, Buster Keaton and MGM" (2004), is one where Elmer, ordered to go out and get some German prisoners, finds some at the dugout where he has a friendly conversation with them and their leader, his former manservant, Gustav. As in most cases in DOUGHBOYS, some routines work, others do not. From what I can see, the funny gags outnumber the weaker ones. Interestingly, since the story takes place "over there" during World War I, take note where the lovesick Keaton briefly sings a few bars of the then popular tune to "You Were Meant For Me" that was originally introduced in the 1929 MGM musical, "The Broadway Melody."

Of the members of the cast that include Victor Potel (Svendenburg); Frank Mayo (Captain Scott); and Pitzy Katz (Abie Cohn), Edward Brophy playing the tough sergeant is truly worth mentioning. He's a sheer reminder to the latter yelling sergeants in Army comedies, namely that of Frank Sutton's Sergeant Carter in the popular TV sit-com, "Gomer Pyle, U.S.M.C." for CBS(1964-1969) starring Jim Nabors in the title role. Shows like this indicates how the military comedies never seem to go out of style.

As with most Keaton comedies during his MGM years (1928-1933), DOUGHBOYS is forgotten. Having initially watched DOUGHBOYS on late night television in 1978 from WKBS, Channel 48, in Philadelphia, then the home to many MGM film titles, it's good to know that, good, bad or indifferent, DOUGHBOYS still available for viewing long after it ceased showing on broadcast television. Thanks to the Ted Turner library where this and other Keaton MGM titles have became readily available on home video (1993) and DVD, DOUGHBOYS continues to be shown on Turner Classic Movies as a insight to those interested in learning more about the comedy legend of Buster Keaton and why his career slowly dipped into decline while under the reign of the MGM lion. (**)

This film seems like no one was sure of what to do now that they had to include sound. Keaton shares a number of scenes with Cliff Richards, an odd talent who most reminds me of Charlie McCarthy. Much of the dialog is spoken by the drill Sergent as he screams at Keaton. Keaton's gags are reduced to the sort that would have been throw-aways in his silent films. Many of the pratfalls are forced as you can see Keaton set himself up for another mishap. The entire cast seems unrehearsed. Some of the film is so oddly edited that I wonder if the print we have now was chopped up after the initial release. Compare this film with "Spite Marriage" from a year before and you'll wonder too how the same crew could have made both films. Not recommendable.

"Doughboys" is a really quirky 1930 movie made by Buster Keaton at MGM — his fourth film for them and his second talkie. As the title implies, it's about World War I — or "The Great War," as World War I was usually referred to before there was a World War II — and Keaton drew on his own experiences for some of its story even though other writers (Al Boasberg — whom he'd worked with before on the 1926 silent classic "The General" — Richard Schayer and Sidney Lazarus) got the credit. Keaton plays one of his usual spoiled rich-kid characters, Elmer Julius Stuyvesant II, who's angrily turned down by the woman of his dreams, Mary (Sally Eilers), who indignantly tells him off when he asks her for a date because "you Rolls-Royces think you can have anything." Then the U.S. gets involved in the war and Elmer finds himself suddenly losing his chauffeur because the man has run off and enlisted. Keaton's manservant/bodyguard/factotum/whatever, Gustave (Arnold Korff), suggests that he contact an employment agency to hire another — an immediate necessity because neither Elmer nor Gustave know how to drive. (The moment we hear Gustave speaking with a pretty thick German accent we know the screenwriters are making a deposit into the Cliché Bank which they will later withdraw — and they do.) Only what used to be an employment agency specializing in chauffeurs is now the recruiting office for the U.S. Army — the sign explaining its change of identity has fallen off and we don't realize this until Gustave picks it up while Elmer is already inside — and Elmer, in a gag Abbott and Costello repeated in their sensationally successful service comedy "Buck Privates" 11 years later, finds himself mistakenly having enlisted. Elmer and a few other unpromising-looking recruits, including Nescopeck (Cliff "Ukulele Ike" Edwards), find themselves under the ultra-domineering leadership of drill sergeant Edward Brophy (he's actually called "Sgt. Brophy" in the dialogue), who'd already acted with Keaton as the other man trapped in the changing room at the beach resort in "The Cameraman" (and his training with Keaton stood him in good stead years later when he appeared in "Swing Parade of 1946" with the Three Stooges and joined so heavily in their slapstick he virtually became a Fourth Stooge). Brophy's performance here is so intense and mean he's one of the three most sadistic drill sergeants ever put on screen, alongside Frank Sutton's Sergeant Carter in the 1960's TV show "Gomer Pyle, U.S.M.C." and R. Lee Ermey in Stanley Kubrick's 1987 Viet Nam war film "Full Metal Jacket." "Doughboys" also contains a romantic triangle, as Mary has an on-again off-again attraction to Elmer while Sgt. Brophy has appointed himself her boyfriend — even though she finds him as appalling as we do — and threatens any other man who approaches her with bodily harm. About midway through the film the principals actually ship out to the combat zone in France — and the film becomes a grim slog through the gritty realities of combat.

What's fascinating about "Doughboys" is that instead of mixing comedy and drama the way one would have expected from a Keaton film (especially if one came to this movie with the expectation, "Cool! He's going to do to World War I what he did to the Civil War in 'The General'!"), it's really a dramatic film and the funny scenes seem more like comic relief than the main event, at least partly because it lacks musical underscoring, though in all other respects — fluidity of camera movement, variety of angles and naturalistic delivery of dialogue instead of all that damnable … pausing … afflicting all too many early sound films — technically it looks more like a movie from 1935 than 1930. Indeed, it's a surprisingly grim movie for something whose star's reputation is as a comedian; only the great scene in which the men of "K" Company put on an amateur show in France (that gets broken up when a German plane bombs the theatre where they're performing) and Buster Keaton does drag and plays the partner of an apache dancer is actually laugh-out-loud funny. Keaton based much of the movie on his own experiences in the war; he was drafted in 1918 and went through basic training but the war was over by the time his unit arrived in France, and so he spent much of his time drilling and participating in amateur theatricals, in some of which he donned drag as his character does in the movie. (Busby Berkeley also got drafted into World War I but arrived in France too late to actually fight; instead he and his company drilled, drilled, and drilled again, and his biographers agree that it was this constant drilling that led him, as a Broadway and Hollywood choreographer, to manipulate his dancers in militaristic formations.) "Doughboys" is a film of individual scenes rather than a well-constructed story (another aspect, besides the war setting and the crazy drill sergeant, it shares with Full Metal Jacket), and just when it seems Keaton and his writers can't come up with a happy ending, a deus ex machina arrives in the form of the war suddenly ending. It's a fascinating movie that isn't really funny enough to fit comfortably into the Keaton canon but it's also considerably better than any of his other MGM talkies, and for virtually the last time Keaton was able to make a starring feature that reflected his surprisingly dark vision of the world. "Doughboys" is a movie that sometimes seems decades ahead of his time, and it could be remade today with only minimal updating. Certainly there are few films like it, even though the darkness and grimness through much of its running time is hardly what one expects from a movie featuring one of the greatest comedians of all time.

Doughboys (1930)

* (out of 4)

Horrendous and embarrassing "comedy" features Buster Keaton playing a rich man who accidentally signs up for the Army but once there he's pleasantly surprised and happy to see the woman (Sally Eilers) who kept turning him down on the outside. After a classic (THE CAMERAMAN) and a good film (SPITE MARRIAGE) it pretty much went downhill for Keaton when he signed with MGM. I think some of the movies he made for the studio are underrated or at least overly criticized but DOUGHBOYS is without question the worst and I'd say it's also probably one of the worst to come from a major studio during this era. I'm really not sure where the start because the entire film is just one embarrassing moment after another but I guess we can start with the screenplay. This type of comedy certainly didn't go hand and hand with Keaton because he's the last type of comedian who should be playing a part like this. The actor constantly looks as if he's being held back by the screenplay and what's even worse is that every once in a while we're given "classic Keaton" routines but even these here fail miserably. There are a few instances where Keaton's style of slapstick is used but it just never works because the script is so lazy. Keaton slips and slides around in some mud, gets in trouble with the drill sergeant and for the first twenty-minutes of the movie he just comes across annoying by constantly giving dumb answers to questions. Eddie Brophy plays the drill sergeant and he too comes across quite annoying as he does nothing but scream and it's not funny. The direction is weak, the comedy has no laughs and the entire production just has a very cheap feel to it. There are a few chuckles here and there but that's not good enough for someone with as much talent as Keaton.

I've read some terrible things about «Doughboys" (1930) , Buster Keaton's second talkie, over the years, but it's not really all that bad; mind you, it's not all that great, either. It is probably the archetypal "wrongly-enlisted-in-the-army" comedy, which has enough entries to make up an entire sub-genre. Keaton is a master of deadpan comedy, and his voice perfectly matches his demeanor. The film has occasional funny gags, but not enough to sustain its feature length. The script, if it can be called that, is very weak, but there are some impressive pyrotechnics, this being an MGM production. There is also a most bizarre "army revue" song-and dance show where the entire troupe, including Buster and apart from one girl, are men in drag (!). ** out of 4.