I normally enjoy these short romances with Seth Edeen in the male lead, but couldn't really get into this one.
First, while I know these shorts thrive on screenplays that rival or exceed soap operas in loads of melodrama and illogical events, this one has so many that the storyline is effectively obliterated. I can tolerate maybe a half dozen unrealistic turn of events, but this one has about 3 dozen.
Also, this particular female lead just isn't suited to play the role of the hot romance femme. Sorry, but you can tell she is just naturally a shy, passive personality. She might be better suited for some light-spirited Hallmark roles.
